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Flanders Screams


A gentle wind asks
Answered, simply, why not still
Said family grieve




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Maurice Yvonne

March 27, 2015 at 5:00 AM

Brilliant, one the best Haiku I have read. Another Fav!

James Fraser

March 29, 2015 at 3:56 PM

Hi Maurice, thank you so much for your kind words on Friday in your comments. Apologies for getting back to you so late, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 25, 2015 at 9:56 AM

Dino James, this three short lines speaks of so much.. I don't know what Flanders are to be honest and so I did lil reading.. :)! after I understood your poem.. :) the first and third line, is a good way to put a reader like me in thinking.. :)! Pen more!!.. :D!..hugs..xxx//olive eloisa

James Fraser

March 25, 2015 at 2:22 PM

Your like me Oliz, if not sure, a little research broadens the picture. We'll learn from each other on many topics of which I look forward to. I'll spill my ink more ;-) warm hugs little one, hugs//James xxx

Constance La France

March 25, 2015 at 9:20 AM

James, in a few words you bring such emotion, war brings such sadness, this haiku is a perfect 7 for me, I seldom write of war but I did write a poem called, rest now, brave warrior, if you have time perhaps you could visit it and thanks so much for visiting my poem, it snowed . .

James Fraser

March 25, 2015 at 2:16 PM

It was a pleasure to read your poem 'It Snowed' also 'Rest Now, Brave Warrior' <*> Many thanks for gracing my pages, always a joy seeing you here, hugs//James :)

Paul Callus

March 24, 2015 at 4:05 PM

A few words that imply a lot, James. Flanders has long been an inspiration for some of my poetic thoughts. I also have a co-write waiting on the shelf; will post later on in the year. All the best. // paul

James Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM

Hi Paul, I also as you've just read. I've written a few poems on war, with poems about the holókauston, etc. I look forward to reading your co-write later this year. Kind regards, James :)

Nette Onclaud

March 24, 2015 at 2:01 PM

the prince is in a space of depth..wonderful piece as always.. huggs

James Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 2:45 PM

Thank you kindly Princess. I had a gut feeling that this poem wouldn't get any comments, but I'm glad it did. Happy evening to you, hugs//James :) :)

M. L. Kiser

March 24, 2015 at 9:59 AM

Quite a profound Haiku.

James Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 2:38 PM

Hiya MLK, nice to see you back again, and thank you as always, James :) :)

James Peranteau

March 23, 2015 at 10:15 AM

A desire and wiki, and my appreciation for this write grew overwhelmingly dear poet ! This was awsome James ! I love the Haiku ! Have a blesssed one sir.....much love, james

James Peranteau

March 23, 2015 at 2:19 PM

*les clins d'oeil de poete*.............much love, james

James Fraser

March 23, 2015 at 2:17 PM

The first World War hits home hard as does any war. When I view the battle scenes of Flanders, it beggars belief what man can do to man in retaliation of one man being shot, quite incredible to be honest. Have a blessed day Sir, hugs and smiles for Noah and you my poetry buddy, James :) :)

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