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Flame Turns To Embers

soft skin like honey a gentle caress like wind ...and so it begins soft lips meet soft lips kisses enflame the passion ... passion engulfs us two hearts beat as one with arms and legs entangled ... flame turns to embers *(this is not for the contest)

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Date: 2/7/2011 8:34:00 AM
Nice trio of senryu poems. All very descriptive.
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Date: 2/6/2011 5:35:00 AM
Very nice loving Poetry Francine.. so enjoyed...Michael
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:00:00 PM
Great senryu Francine. I wanted to thank you for my no. 1 rating along with Linda Marie in your fun contest, It sure moved fast. Loe, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:56:00 PM
Wouldn't it be wonderful to live the words in some of the poetry we read and write. Dreamy piece Francine....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:21:00 PM
Hon, this poem intensifies the feelings of longing. How I wish we could all have such a love. Beautifully written dear. Made me tear up a bit. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:54:00 AM
the subtle sensuality of this piece glows inside out , francine... hope you enter it in the contest!! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:52:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my blog. This poem is sizzling and lovely~~
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:46:00 PM
hot flames!
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:45:00 PM
Wow, this is so passionate Francine, in fact it is a very beautiful poem. Harry
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:23:00 PM
Tenderly romantic and passionate Francine.. gets the flames burning brightly my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:08:00 PM
ahhh, here is that beauty!!! I found it! (it would work really well in Linda's contest, I am sure of it!) Luv, andrea
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:24:00 PM
Very cute and lovely picture of the two hearts beating as one, Francine
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:07:00 PM
Extremely passionate one.Nice write.
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:21:00 AM
I love it! well done - Liz
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:17:00 AM
Hello Francine, Thank you for your comment on "Jaded Love" but I already entered your Contest with "Loves Reflections" Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:02:00 AM
smile -- this is sooo extremely passionate and well brushed my dear -- the type of painting which takes hold of ones Soul and upon a journies path amid the slow motions mesmerized within such images as this, a dreamful thought -- so very softly beautiful and a fave, just like you -- love, christopher ~
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:57:00 AM
Hello Francine, Love this, it is just beautiful and it made me sigh each time I read it. Sorry about confusing your name. Again, this is wonderful! Lov, Shar
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