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First Valentine

First Valentine The brandishing green of winter grass, So wielding in its way As it guiles the hearts of first lovers To hold hands on a sunny day; Fantasy of a Valentine. In this time nature produces no red, Save the berries on a few winter bushes, Apples must another season wait, To fake our lovers’ blind pushes Into their first rose-tender kiss. Budding sweethearts entertain possibilities Of love in the green of here and now, A modern Eve gives him a cardboard apple, He accepts, his heart a surrendering bow. His Valentine is his ever true ardor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/14/2019 6:22:00 PM
Not your surgery run of the mill Valentine Sunlite. Your poem is uniquely creative and a joy to read on this lovely Valentine's day. I loved it! I hope you had a wonderful Valentine's day Sunlite! xxoo
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Date: 2/8/2019 10:47:00 AM
Tender, romantic poem fit for a valentine dearest, Eve! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 2/7/2019 12:40:00 PM
how fascinating; love lives on through your words, sun...huggs
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:58:00 PM
- A unique and lovely Valentine poem, Sunlite ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2019 11:44:00 AM
A splendid Valentine write, Sunlite one that would warm any lovers heart! Thx for your kind comment re On Bended Knee. As you know from most of my writes, I don't often get this "sugary" but this one seemed to fit the sponsors requirements for a Valentine verse. Happy Valentines' Day - Bob
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Date: 2/5/2019 10:37:00 AM
Yes, its hard to find natural valentines in February. Thanks for reading and writing my poems. Love, Joyce
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