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First Time Magic

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Hall of mirrors, reflection and cheers of cherry eyes.* Toddler’s dimpled cherub skies open amazingly wide. Coruscating spectral display of fairy lights on preponderant fir. Silver and gold charms the little prince’s irises. Nuzzle of a red nose ~ dancing reindeer comes to life. He offers her a diamond ring - their lips animated under the mistletoe. 11/28/2021 BITE SIZE POEM no28 Sponsor: Line Gauthier *cherry - innocent, new

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2022 8:56:00 AM

sweet ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2022 10:26:00 AM

Thank you, Line :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/6/2021 10:10:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 4:31:00 AM

Thank you, Beata!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/6/2021 10:02:00 AM

Kim, this just overflows with such rich imagery. Love "nuzzle of a red nose." Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Sam!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2021 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "FIRST TIME MAGIC" was magical. Have a blessed day.................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:31:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Ann Peck

Date: 12/5/2021 11:24:00 AM

Such a sweet poem! I love that the dancing reindeer came to life :) Congratulations on your win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, Ann! xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/5/2021 8:08:00 AM

Great experience sharing - like! Lively and beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:26:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:23:00 PM

Ah so pretty "Toddler’s dimpled cherub skies open amazingly wide." A wonderful write, Kim. No surprise there.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:25:00 AM

Love ya, my friend! Thank you!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/29/2021 1:53:00 PM

First of all, I am in love with the title and the magical flow of jingling metaphors and the crackling of spouted love with those timeless lines at the end. One of the evergreens, I have ever gone through. Best wishes.... Silpika

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2021 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much! Wishing you a lot of merry!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/29/2021 2:13:00 AM

A delightful bitesize poem. Best for a win. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2021 8:36:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/28/2021 10:10:00 PM

All first do seem magical, don't they. Thanks for the nudge to look back and remember a few of them. Brought a smile to this old mug of mine. Kim's friend, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2021 8:36:00 AM

So happy to see you smile! Smiling back at you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2021 7:30:00 PM

Dazzling display of delight, Kim. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2021 8:26:00 PM

So glad you are delighted!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/28/2021 5:09:00 PM

Your poem just leaps and twirls with holiday joy - love the 'nuzzle of a red nose' the most!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2021 8:26:00 PM

Thank you! Glad you loved the nuzzle! :)