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First For the Year:

I got my first duck feather today, First one for the season of spring, Standing up proudly, I couldn't walk away, To me, feathers are gifts, straight from the wing. I watched as the turtles all swam about, And saw a cormorant perched on the rocks, With little blue wrens, so tiny and stout, And behind the bushes lurking, was a red fox. I have walked this path many times before, So many massive pine trees so royal on the way, I will always come back to this place I am sure, Just to sit and watch all the majestic trees sway. But where have all the rabbits gone from last year? I think the rangers poisoned them, to make them disappear. /|\

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Date: 11/5/2016 1:31:00 PM
Clever poem, Rick. Surprise endings are the best, eh. Donald's going to get you. Lol. Cool write. Love you, brother. RW
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:01:00 PM
This one was suppose to be a sonnet, but all the syllables were out. Thanks RW /|\
Date: 10/17/2016 7:37:00 AM
Wow Rick, I was having a wonderful little stroll through nature when those last two lines jumped out from behind a tree and caught me off guard. Really nice, I just wish the rabbits had survived.
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Date: 10/17/2016 8:15:00 AM
It's such a vast area that they have disappeared from too! Thanks Chris /|\
Date: 10/17/2016 5:51:00 AM
Lovely sonnet...Beautifully penned...So sorry for the rabbits. Here, some people kill squirrels for the meat...
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Date: 10/17/2016 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Supraja, I love squirrels too, not that we have any in Australia. I've only seen them on documentaries. /|\

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