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First Date

heads close together we sit and whisper our thoughts... in the wintry sun old friends finding out something new not sure how our friendship grew. just know that deep inside a glow when I say your name out loud. our first date, you hold my hand as we walk along the windy shore, shielding our faces from the whirling sand stop for that first kiss, felt spirits soar, never felt like this before. penned 4/1/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/16/2016 7:24:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:59:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:34:00 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:43:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thanks Skat....Seren
Date: 1/5/2016 3:16:00 AM
Seren, BEAUTIFUL !!!
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:40:00 AM
Seren, great first date! A7 good luck in the Contest!
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