Firefly

I am a firefly left out in the day with no one to see but how bright in the dark when I am all luminosity!

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/2/2021 8:50:00 PM

This is pretty and uplifts my soul.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2021 4:16:00 PM

Sorry about your dear Tippu. As for your little poem here, it's very sweet and one of the best little poems I have seen today

Valsa George
Date: 11/29/2021 8:59:00 PM

Thanks a lot Andrea.... ! Your sweet words of empathy have cooled my heart !

Deb M

Date: 11/29/2021 1:07:00 AM

And a lovely firefly you are Valsa! Really Sweet poem. Enjoyed. Debx

Valsa George
Date: 11/29/2021 8:57:00 PM

So sweet of you Deb ! Thanks a lot !

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/28/2021 10:10:00 AM

Aren't they beautiful in a summer night? ~~

Valsa George
Date: 11/29/2021 8:57:00 PM

Yes, on summer nights, they are like starlets strewn over the sky. Thank you Victor !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2021 4:59:00 AM

I hear the message of your poem--lovely observation you make, Valsa.

Valsa George
Date: 11/29/2021 8:55:00 PM

Thanks a lot Vijay ! Your encouragement counts much to me !