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Fingerprints of Time

Life has left fingerprints on my skin and spirit,
     and deep in my soul I bear the scars of time;
memory, delicate and brittle has cracked with old age,
          I am frail and feeble, and my days are fragile threads.

It was not always so, once I was so beautiful,
     and I have the tarnished photographs of then;
I look at that girl with skin like milk who was beloved,
         where did she go and who is this old woman reflected.

Yes, a girl who loved a nature walk in all seasons,
      trees reflected in the lakes and rivers and streams;
once I had a true love, and now I have forgotten his name,
            my mind is like an abandoned building with cobwebs.
 
But, in moments so sweet I recall a word,
     I see a reflection of the past bright and clear;
then, it is gone, gone and I am left with a falling tear,
          all the beauty has faded, I no longer even try to hold it.

Best I keep the fingerprints of my life to me,
     who wants to hear the stories of an old lady;
oh, I have lived a fathomless life but I forgot the details,
          so here I am, fragile as glass and just a bit tarnished.

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March 28, 2018


Poetry/Verse/Fingerprints of Time
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1007-721-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym. 


Written for the contest, Tarnished Reflections
sponsor, John Lawless

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 11:18 PM
A most endearing poem, BW, and most deserving top win. Bravo.
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April 2, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE Win BW!!! What an amazing poem! So many great lines here. I loved ... my mind is like an abandoned building with cobwebs. Beautifully done!! ~Judy
Carber Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Oh, this is good, damn good! Your metaphors are near perfect (e.g., ' ..days..are fragile threads') and it's plaintive beauty is heart-wrenching in exactly the way any long life is. My highest compliment, Broken Wings: I wish I had written it (well, male version)....
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Thanks for your last contest too and this latest one that looks so fun to me. Wish they all were as interesting as yours!
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:59 PM
wow, Constance, I saw your comment at John's blog and went to see the winner list again so I could come right to your poem and see it. I can see why this is number one!! Way to go, and congrats. Happy Easter, dear friend.
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem. Well written.
Lawless Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:22 AM
OH BW.....this one grabbed me with the first line and held me to the tarnished reflection of the final line. Thank you for participating in this contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Either you have stretched your imagination twenty-years into the future, or my other impressions of you were so wrong. In my mind, as I read your beautiful poems, you are 42. Best luck in the contest, Broken Wings.
La France Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Caren, thank you for the visit. Yes I used my imagination as I am still young but I worked in a nursing home and saw and felt the sadness of those souls dwelling there, just waiting... and my own beloved Grandma who wanted to tell me stories but just could not find her words...
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