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Finding Love

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How can I convince you that I love you? Shall I climb the highest freezing hillside? Shout that I love you as my voice echoes? Feel my love burning with desire inside? Shall I search for you across the wide world? Perhaps I'll walk along the horizon. I do not know exactly where you are. Find you at sunset or at sun rising? I would rather meander along paths, Where wild nature is at its finest best. Am I dreaming, or do I see you there Under the willow tree? Now I can rest. I amble towards you and ask for love, I'll be faithful, a promise from above. She smiled coyly, asked me to sit near her. 10 syllables per line

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2021 12:35:00 PM

this one is delightful and I love how it meanders to its sweet ending.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 12/28/2021 7:41:00 AM

a truly romantic poem dear Victor - such a delight to read... Hugs Ann xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/28/2021 7:32:00 AM

A lovely poem on finding true love and how to express it, Victor:)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/27/2021 12:31:00 PM

Victor, you have been very busy posting poems…..You have created a gentle and hopeful lover in Finding Love. Romance under the Willow tree…Hope you are staying safe and well, the omicron variant is everywhere here. My son’s family has been isolating even their 2 year old caught the virus. We have been doing daily tests but we are in the clear….Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/27/2021 11:55:00 AM

- A beautiful and so tender poem, Victor ... love it :) hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2021 7:48:00 AM

Great ending, Victor. A start of friendship and maybe love. Hugs and Happy New Year

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/27/2021 3:04:00 AM

A sweet romantic poem Victor, you are the king of romantic poems! hugs

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/27/2021 3:54:00 AM

Thanks for responding.

Valsa George

Date: 12/26/2021 8:56:00 PM

This is lovely.... ! Victor, you are a master of writing strikingly passionate romantic poems. Eager to know how the two will spend the time under the willow tree... will they whisper sweet nothings?!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/26/2021 8:35:00 PM

A charming romance, in a setting of natural glory. This is a fave, my friend.

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/26/2021 4:41:00 PM

Awh!! Romance, beautiful poem...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/26/2021 3:06:00 PM

You old softy you, I love this gentle side of you, :)

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/26/2021 10:52:00 PM

Wait for the other side :(

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2021 2:09:00 PM

Romance a beautiful thing!

Charles Messina

Date: 12/26/2021 7:05:00 AM

Romance at it's, finest, Victor. Always love those happy endings. Sometimes all we have to search for love is in our own backyards, take it from me. I've found and lost it twice in my hometown (lol). Happy Holidays!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/26/2021 6:30:00 AM

I immensely rejoice in your flamboyant personality. The poet that you are is strangely captivating. Bless you for your kind words and charming poem, as well as your exquisite drifting tone and rhythm. This is a Fave for me.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/26/2021 5:13:00 AM

A charming poem, Victor. Enjoyed the romantic tone floating on rhythms of love. And a dream come true under the willow tree. A FAVE for me.

Deb M

Date: 12/26/2021 4:59:00 AM

Hey Victor….a beautiful poem! Do you have a crush on someone or this feelings from years gone by? Take care. Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/26/2021 1:10:00 AM

A verse of romance Victor with a happy ending. Hope you had an enjoyable day yesterday Tom.