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                               Image result for sad woman outside  farmhouse

As she mounts a wagon with few treasures, my middle-aged aunt begins to paint sketches of fields running like her summer skirt, of lush grasses traipsing with autumnal breezes. Still elegant under a dying moon, her fingers reach out to a hum of mist, owning new dreams... her own solitary dreams for now. alone and quiet like chilled dew, she lies quiet--- watching new buds sprout So I tug at her robe feeling the icy scent of a woman’s nostalgia, gently weaving through this moistened fabric. She throttles on with refreshed grace and vigor as we pass the city bridge, drowned by a luster of stars. April greets new hours ushering bright of springtime— while old flakes depart -------------- EARLY JULY PREMIERE CONTEST Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/19/2017 2:26:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette! I love the pastoral feel to it; there is a sense of serenity. Congratulations on this high-flying win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:34:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats!
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:10:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and I love the image too
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:28:00 AM
Well done and congratulations Nette...
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Date: 2/18/2017 7:14:00 AM
"And I cuddle her robe feeling the icy scent of a woman’s nostalgia,..." an exceptional line Nette. Adore the last line of the first prose as well. A great story beautifully written.
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Date: 2/18/2017 5:53:00 AM
Beautiful haibun! Congrats on your win, Nette.
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Date: 2/18/2017 3:17:00 AM
Great write and win Nette...Congrats
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Date: 2/16/2017 8:55:00 PM
Beautiful Nette...every note in pitch and lushly strummed
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Date: 2/16/2017 10:43:00 AM
Nette!! You make a haibun look so easy!! Gifted you are my friend!! Well done. Big Hugggs deb!! :)
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Date: 2/15/2017 12:43:00 PM
This is good nette, a pastel picture painted in the reader's mind...good luck
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:28:00 AM
This are lovely words! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/15/2017 8:29:00 AM
I got the impression of a trip to a beautiful place. Much enjoyed the combination of styles! Good luck dear, nette!
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:54:00 AM
Glorious trip through a beautiful setting of an artist Infront of her canvas palette in hand:-) good luck in the contest hugs
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:41:00 AM
The reason why I like this exceptional poetry is that it brings me from one place in time to another with such mellow and evocative expressions.
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Date: 2/15/2017 6:35:00 AM
The best part of reading your wonderful poems Nette is my mind gets to take a short vacation from the everyday hustle and bustle to slow down a bit and take in the beauty that I now see.
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Date: 2/15/2017 5:21:00 AM
You always take me every step of the way with stirring poems, and this one is no exception!
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Date: 2/15/2017 4:21:00 AM
- Every day .... each new month one newfound journey - Beautifully written, Nette :) - I wish you luck in the contest - and a happy day with a smile on your lips :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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