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Overcast her heart hovers in the night Afflicted with morose melancholy Under a firmament where stars burn bright Up there they glow for everyone but her Each breath is but a curse of monochrome Whilst his soul is trapped in a kaleidoscope Each night with zeal she let her heart free roam Clinging to infinitesimal hope Closing her eyes launching the same crusade Trying to intercept the furtive glance of a shallow moon to secure an aide a confidante if not an alliance Humble by day, nonchalance she feigns With the devotion of ascetic bane AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on January 19, 2018 for contest ENGLISH SONNET LOST LOVE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 6TH

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Date: 2/12/2018 8:02:00 PM
A deep and poignant sonnet Line with wonderful use of the required words that blend with the fabulous fabric of your poem beauitfully. Congratulations on your lovely placement in the contest. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 10:22:00 PM
Most appreciated, Susan. Thank you for your visit and comment.
Date: 2/12/2018 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, line, nicely done and great imagery enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/12/2018 6:50:00 PM
Think you so much, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/12/2018 6:29:00 PM
Congrats on your placements and you have cool name.
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Date: 2/12/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, John. My name is pronounced Lynn.
Date: 2/12/2018 8:21:00 AM
Congrats Line for an excellent poem, and fine placement!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/11/2018 10:07:00 PM
Ah, the Moon---that furtive mistress. Well-done, Line! Congrats! Gershon Wolf
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 1/20/2018 7:50:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Line I especially love the first line, Good Luck xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2018 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/19/2018 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful, Line. An awesome sonnet.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/20/2018 12:27:00 AM
Thanks, Rhoda. Much appreciated.

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