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Find Me Love!

Why do these walls keep love from finding me? Are soulmates "make-believe" and fantasy? I think cupid has gone and lost his bow. Perhaps that wasn't the wind that passed but his arrow. I can only hope this loneliness does not last. But days seem to extend as time pass. I believe love is hiding amongst the shadows. Eventually I'll be free like lilies blowing in the meadow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/6/2011 8:10:00 PM
I like this poem. Keep it up- J.H.
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:03:00 AM
LOVE your poem Jimmy! Fuzzy.
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:58:00 AM
Surely, love hides somewhere...it's going to catch up with ya. Great piece with great emotions... congrats on your piece being featured this week on ps homepage. Keep writing. Adeleke.
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:25:00 PM
Lovely shortie Jimmy, you will be free to view the lillies in the meadow, and nature will entice words from your portfolio to write and write >> James
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:48:00 PM
NIcely done. I like the second couplet about cupid and the last line. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/29/2009 5:06:00 AM
Thank you for sharing a bit of your heart with us today Jimmy.Love, Carol
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