Find Me Love!

Why do these walls keep love from finding me?
Are soulmates "make-believe" and fantasy?

     I think cupid has gone and lost his bow.
Perhaps that wasn't the wind that passed but his arrow.

     I can only hope this loneliness does not last.
But days seem to extend as time pass.

     I believe love is hiding amongst the shadows.
Eventually I'll be free like lilies blowing in the meadow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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J.T. Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 8:10 PM
I like this poem. Keep it up- J.H.
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Jimmy. Love, Carol
Sk Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 5:03 AM
LOVE your poem Jimmy! Fuzzy.
Adeite Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:58 AM
Surely, love hides somewhere...it's going to catch up with ya. Great piece with great emotions... congrats on your piece being featured this week on ps homepage. Keep writing. Adeleke.
Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 1:25 PM
Lovely shortie Jimmy, you will be free to view the lillies in the meadow, and nature will entice words from your portfolio to write and write >> James
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 12:48 PM
NIcely done. I like the second couplet about cupid and the last line. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 5:06 AM
Thank you for sharing a bit of your heart with us today Jimmy.Love, Carol
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