Finally

I walk a beaten path, through the snow winding through, Trees, bushes, ice patches and footprints about to be forgotten As they melt and slip away toward the muddy areas nearby Where the soft impressions may last just a little bit longer Many times, I would imagine you walking with me here But, as time passes, dreams are replaced with other’s actions As I awaken from dreams that have melted away too Then, my hand reaches for another that will welcome me As I am, with the same smile back at me, the same words, finally Heidi Sands 12/25/19

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/31/2019 8:59:00 AM

Very nice, Heidi. GREAT poetry! Wishing you and yours a Healthy and Happy New Year!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/31/2019 11:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie! I wish you a very Happy New Year, filled with love, happiness and peace! :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/29/2019 8:46:00 PM

wonderful imagery on that path... the ending seems hopeful... may the new year bless you with all that you desire... hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Sandra. Happy New Year :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 12:47:00 PM

Lovely imagery that leads to an emotional ending, Heidi. Hope you had a lovely Christmas. Regards// paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul. I hope you had a nice Christmas as well , and Happy New Year ! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2019 10:54:00 AM

Love the verse and the imagery of the melting snow and life.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2019 4:48:00 PM

Thank you very much Eve. :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/27/2019 8:51:00 AM

Your verses, more grandeur than ever...superbly executed my friend...Happy New Year coming...^WW^ :o)

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2019 4:48:00 PM

Thank you WW! I appreciate your kind comment. Happy New Year coming :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/27/2019 7:00:00 AM

Nostalgic and dreaming at the same time. Excellent dearest, Heidi xxx

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2019 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios. I appreciate your comment and I hope you have a nice day today :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/27/2019 1:02:00 AM

Heidi, You are a gift and share your poems the whole year through. Imagine there were only two left in the whole world. I wonder if it would find such a kind heart in you. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2019 8:31:00 AM

Richard, thank you for being so kind to me. I appreciate your support and I am grateful to see your comment today :)