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Painting by Puczel

Final Seduction

He had waited for her, all his life.
All she desired was to stay in his arms,
to awaken each day in embrace.
All she needed was the love he bled,
to last every minute of her lifetime -
but tomorrow he would be gone.

His goodbye, cut her like a knife – deeply.
He was trembling inside, but remained calm.
This was his final night with his beloved,
last time they would enjoy each other.
Carnal desires flamed – the final seduction,
like two caged beasts set free.

In pure silence, he could hear her tears falling,
as he touched her, she moved away in sorrow.
He held her hand – delicately kissing her tears,
his mouth a soothing oasis for her waterfalls.

As his subtle tongue soothed her heartbreak,
a flame kindled in her eyes, igniting his soul.
Her tender tongue, opened the door to ecstasy
as tongues danced with lips locked in passion.

He was the curator to her flower garden
and he knew this was his final masterpiece.
His last chance to show his lover – the love he held,
for all he yearned, was her unconditional love.

He removed her clothes, without pausing for breath,
seductively he explored her bronzed olive skin.
Worshipping his Goddess with attentive devotion.
Lost in nirvanic utopia, she opened to him,
as he lost himself, inside her flowergarden.

The night was filled with lovers dancing in paradise.
Breathless moments, hearts rapidly beating.
Two bodies illuminated in sizzling hot intense excitement.

But, when she opened her jaded brown eyes, 
he was gone, leaving a note -
promising to love her till the end of time.

The Silent One
Originally written 17 January 2016
Reposted 7 February 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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DiMino Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 5:22 AM
Wonderful, passionate writing, Si; with that much fondness for one another, I think they will find away back, if not in this lifetime, somewhere in the mystery of forever. As you know, true love is immortal. Great read!
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February 27, 2018 at 6:30 AM
You are right love is immortal.. thank you..
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Hi Silent It is a great writing with a deep message inside. you have described final love beautifully. but on the other hand you have given a silent message that nothing in this world is permanent , today or tomorrow , it is going to leave us or we are going to leave it..... the real charm of a thing is when you had it for sometime . if you have it all the time the charm in it fade away........ thanks and well wishes..........
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February 27, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Thank you Muhammad...
Ajmal Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:51 AM
This poem is really touching, it s sad that eventhough there was so much love in both of them, yet the story remain incomplete, although not willingly but he has to leave, a really beautiful poem,
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Faraz.. so many things in life are incomplete..
White Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:42 PM
I agree get the girl all worked up than see yeah. Flower teaser. Hahaha. Maybe he has erectile dysfunction ? she should have tied him up and taken what she wanted. Lol. Definitely an aphrodisiac. So.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:09 AM
hi Kelli, you have pointed a very serious issue" erectile dysfunction... :) ..............truly the physical love centered around it
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February 9, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Now thats mean lol... she was a willing participant... Thanks Kelli..
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:01 PM
My goodness, why ever did he need to leave her, is what I am left wondering. It kind of looks like a companion piece to the one I wrote about lost love and a guy leaving a lady heartbroken! Very sensual. I loved this image: his mouth a soothing oasis for her waterfalls
One Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Somethings are just not meant to be... Whispers of passion is the second part... Thanks Andrea..
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February 7, 2018 at 4:27 PM
WoW! Silent, You have penned such a sensual and passionate write. It was written in a classy and respectful way. You wrote this as a perfect gentlemen. Too bad that it had to end the way it did, but like you stated in a comment below nothing lasts forever. But If I had a chance to experience a passion/love like you so skillfully wrote about I'll take my chances. Excellent job. I'm so glad you reposted it:-) Alexis
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February 7, 2018 at 4:44 PM
I hope everyone gets a chance to experience such emotions, especially those who have waited for a loved.. Thank you Alexis..
Parker Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 2:06 PM
no explanation needed, perhaps a moment in time, perhaps something else, either way she woke to loneliness
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 4:14 PM
I agree Frederic.. Thank you..
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 1:09 PM
...well that blew all the feathers off the quill...I'm trying to ascertain whether he is a cad or a gentleman. To the reader - does it really matter at the point of climax? For at that point, all is lost.
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February 7, 2018 at 1:12 PM
What is a cad? Well, it is open to your imagination... Something od not last forever, in fact hardly anything does.. Sometimes you can't have what you really want... At the end of the day, it is just an old poem and I have no clue what I was thinking when I wrote this lol
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February 7, 2018 at 11:48 AM
I love this poem so passionate and fill with love and thank you for commenting on my poem call the chase although I am sorry that the person who caused my wounds choose to stalk me on social media and had left disturbing comments that led me to write poems about my pain.
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February 7, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Patricia, sorry for the problems you are experiencing, but it shows you were justified in what you said..
Michael Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 11:12 AM
I like the vibes...Keep the love coming...All the best SO
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thanks Arturo..
S     Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:19 AM
So poetically painted torid passion. But why ... if he waited for her all his life and she desired to be in his arms ... why did he leave? Such a sad and heartbreaking mystery. A master of word painted emotion .. you never disappoint with your amazing work Silent One!!!
Williams Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Yes about to embark on an interstellar journey to find the cad Lol....Maria
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Well could be so many different scenarios... Long distance love, he could be from the army... Or maybe he was from another planet, Maria Williams and July Morning could vouch for that.. thanks for reading...
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Sensual and passionate, but never overstepping limits. Excellent buildup. No sequel necessary...mystery enhances the strength of this poem. Beautiful Gregorian type music....Regards // paul
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February 7, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Paul..
Talbot Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 8:59 AM
My heart pounded with your every word, but then the end. Did it happen, or was it fantasy your quill did blend? Poetry in the hands of a master, truth or pretend. Happiness, respectful sadness, all manner of emotions to life it lends. Inspiration is now what you read, thank you my poet friend! ...... Mick
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February 7, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Mick and thank you for the dedication..
Sands Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 8:54 AM
A very deep and passionate , well written poem Silent One, bringing with it the longing and emotions.
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Heidi..
Gentile Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Such a sensual portrayal of passion, Silent One. Got my heart racing so early this morning!!!
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Hope you've calmed.... Thanks Mike..
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:25 AM
A masterpiece of romantic passion. Very well done S.O. Regards Tom.w
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February 7, 2018 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Tom..
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:36 AM
A sizzling romance from start to finish--words of seduction adorn this poem with a delicate sense of belonging. Short lived.. yet eternal love..good imagination, Silent One.
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:38 AM
Sadly something never last forever, thank you Vijay..
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 5:50 AM
Wow! A steamy romantic, erotic and beautifully written poem Si. You paint a really sensual picture of two lovers entwined in each other’s passion - Does this mean he is still in the seminary and was that his last fling?...Maria
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Thank you Maria.. I will leave that to the imagination of the reader.. Maybe he was an alien, something you and Tommy know about...
Teagan Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 5:32 AM
This is tastefully done. Very romantic and sensual. lol "in sizzling hot excitement" and "Lost in her flowergarden!" :)
One Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, flowergarden is a well used term, that can be interpreted differently, ahem...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 5:27 AM
Great romantic mystery poem, SO! The mystery is why he had to leave his great love. Only your cryptic pen knows, eh. But, perhaps there is a sequel to this stunning piece of prose. Fabulous imagery and an astounding poem on so many levels of emotion and intellect. An instant Romantic Warrior fave for sure. Love and smiles forever.
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February 7, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Thank you Freddie, was going through some of my old romantic poems, this one is a bit sensual, and was not sure about posting it.. Thank you for the FAV... Great compliment from the romantic warrior..
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