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Painting by Puczel

He had waited for her, all his life.
All she desired was to stay in his arms,
to awaken each day in embrace.
All she needed was the love he bled,
to last every minute of her lifetime -
but tomorrow he would be gone.

His goodbye, cut her like a knife – deeply.
He was trembling inside, but remained calm.
This was his final night with his beloved,
last time they would enjoy each other.
Carnal desires flamed – the final seduction,
like two caged beasts set free.

In pure silence, he could hear her tears falling,
as he touched her, she moved away in sorrow.
He held her hand – delicately kissing her tears,
his mouth a soothing oasis for her waterfalls.

As his subtle tongue soothed her heartbreak,
a flame kindled in her eyes, igniting his soul.
Her tender tongue, opened the door to ecstasy
as tongues danced with lips locked in passion.

He was the curator to her flower garden
and he knew this was his final masterpiece.
His last chance to show his lover – the love he held,
for all he yearned, was her unconditional love.

He removed her clothes, without pausing for breath,
seductively he explored her bronzed olive skin.
Worshipping his Goddess with attentive devotion.
Lost in nirvanic utopia, she opened to him,
as he lost himself, inside her flowergarden.

The night was filled with lovers dancing in paradise.
Breathless moments, hearts rapidly beating.
Two bodies illuminated in sizzling hot intense excitement.

But, when she opened her jaded brown eyes, 
he was gone, leaving a note -
promising to love her till the end of time.

The Silent One
Originally written 17 January 2016
Reposted 7 February 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/27/2018 5:22:00 AM
Wonderful, passionate writing, Si; with that much fondness for one another, I think they will find away back, if not in this lifetime, somewhere in the mystery of forever. As you know, true love is immortal. Great read!
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:30:00 AM
You are right love is immortal.. thank you..
Date: 2/24/2018 12:07:00 AM
Hi Silent It is a great writing with a deep message inside. you have described final love beautifully. but on the other hand you have given a silent message that nothing in this world is permanent , today or tomorrow , it is going to leave us or we are going to leave it..... the real charm of a thing is when you had it for sometime . if you have it all the time the charm in it fade away........ thanks and well wishes..........
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Muhammad...
Date: 2/10/2018 10:51:00 AM
This poem is really touching, it s sad that eventhough there was so much love in both of them, yet the story remain incomplete, although not willingly but he has to leave, a really beautiful poem,
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Faraz.. so many things in life are incomplete..
Date: 2/7/2018 9:42:00 PM
I agree get the girl all worked up than see yeah. Flower teaser. Hahaha. Maybe he has erectile dysfunction ? she should have tied him up and taken what she wanted. Lol. Definitely an aphrodisiac. So.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 12:09:00 AM
hi Kelli, you have pointed a very serious issue" erectile dysfunction... :) ..............truly the physical love centered around it
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Silent One
Date: 2/9/2018 3:43:00 PM
Now thats mean lol... she was a willing participant... Thanks Kelli..
Date: 2/7/2018 9:01:00 PM
My goodness, why ever did he need to leave her, is what I am left wondering. It kind of looks like a companion piece to the one I wrote about lost love and a guy leaving a lady heartbroken! Very sensual. I loved this image: his mouth a soothing oasis for her waterfalls
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Silent One
Date: 2/9/2018 3:44:00 PM
Somethings are just not meant to be... Whispers of passion is the second part... Thanks Andrea..
Date: 2/7/2018 4:27:00 PM
WoW! Silent, You have penned such a sensual and passionate write. It was written in a classy and respectful way. You wrote this as a perfect gentlemen. Too bad that it had to end the way it did, but like you stated in a comment below nothing lasts forever. But If I had a chance to experience a passion/love like you so skillfully wrote about I'll take my chances. Excellent job. I'm so glad you reposted it:-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:44:00 PM
I hope everyone gets a chance to experience such emotions, especially those who have waited for a loved.. Thank you Alexis..
Date: 2/7/2018 2:06:00 PM
no explanation needed, perhaps a moment in time, perhaps something else, either way she woke to loneliness
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:14:00 PM
I agree Frederic.. Thank you..
Date: 2/7/2018 1:09:00 PM
...well that blew all the feathers off the quill...I'm trying to ascertain whether he is a cad or a gentleman. To the reader - does it really matter at the point of climax? For at that point, all is lost.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 1:12:00 PM
What is a cad? Well, it is open to your imagination... Something od not last forever, in fact hardly anything does.. Sometimes you can't have what you really want... At the end of the day, it is just an old poem and I have no clue what I was thinking when I wrote this lol
Date: 2/7/2018 11:48:00 AM
I love this poem so passionate and fill with love and thank you for commenting on my poem call the chase although I am sorry that the person who caused my wounds choose to stalk me on social media and had left disturbing comments that led me to write poems about my pain.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Patricia, sorry for the problems you are experiencing, but it shows you were justified in what you said..
Date: 2/7/2018 11:12:00 AM
I like the vibes...Keep the love coming...All the best SO
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Arturo..
Date: 2/7/2018 9:19:00 AM
So poetically painted torid passion. But why ... if he waited for her all his life and she desired to be in his arms ... why did he leave? Such a sad and heartbreaking mystery. A master of word painted emotion .. you never disappoint with your amazing work Silent One!!!
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/8/2018 6:09:00 AM
Yes about to embark on an interstellar journey to find the cad Lol....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 10:11:00 AM
Well could be so many different scenarios... Long distance love, he could be from the army... Or maybe he was from another planet, Maria Williams and July Morning could vouch for that.. thanks for reading...
Date: 2/7/2018 9:09:00 AM
Sensual and passionate, but never overstepping limits. Excellent buildup. No sequel necessary...mystery enhances the strength of this poem. Beautiful Gregorian type music....Regards // paul
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Paul..
Date: 2/7/2018 8:59:00 AM
My heart pounded with your every word, but then the end. Did it happen, or was it fantasy your quill did blend? Poetry in the hands of a master, truth or pretend. Happiness, respectful sadness, all manner of emotions to life it lends. Inspiration is now what you read, thank you my poet friend! ...... Mick
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Mick and thank you for the dedication..
Date: 2/7/2018 8:54:00 AM
A very deep and passionate , well written poem Silent One, bringing with it the longing and emotions.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 2/7/2018 7:44:00 AM
Such a sensual portrayal of passion, Silent One. Got my heart racing so early this morning!!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 10:04:00 AM
Hope you've calmed.... Thanks Mike..
Date: 2/7/2018 7:25:00 AM
A masterpiece of romantic passion. Very well done S.O. Regards Tom.w
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Tom..
Date: 2/7/2018 6:36:00 AM
A sizzling romance from start to finish--words of seduction adorn this poem with a delicate sense of belonging. Short lived.. yet eternal love..good imagination, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 6:38:00 AM
Sadly something never last forever, thank you Vijay..
Date: 2/7/2018 5:50:00 AM
Wow! A steamy romantic, erotic and beautifully written poem Si. You paint a really sensual picture of two lovers entwined in each other’s passion - Does this mean he is still in the seminary and was that his last fling?...Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Maria.. I will leave that to the imagination of the reader.. Maybe he was an alien, something you and Tommy know about...
Date: 2/7/2018 5:32:00 AM
This is tastefully done. Very romantic and sensual. lol "in sizzling hot excitement" and "Lost in her flowergarden!" :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, flowergarden is a well used term, that can be interpreted differently, ahem...
Date: 2/7/2018 5:27:00 AM
Great romantic mystery poem, SO! The mystery is why he had to leave his great love. Only your cryptic pen knows, eh. But, perhaps there is a sequel to this stunning piece of prose. Fabulous imagery and an astounding poem on so many levels of emotion and intellect. An instant Romantic Warrior fave for sure. Love and smiles forever.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Freddie, was going through some of my old romantic poems, this one is a bit sensual, and was not sure about posting it.. Thank you for the FAV... Great compliment from the romantic warrior..