Final Petal To Fall

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Written: June 16, 2023 Dead flower's last bud ebbing mana of the wane yearns - a rotting flower mourns she has a yen for the brimming sun song weaves shielding in her gemstone womb splashing glitter on spring's canvas tinged with rust and crimson cardinals to foster the avian fantasies of a winter-weakened wilderness!

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/16/2023 6:31:00 PM

Beautiful sentiment. ~~ a winter-weakened wilderness!~~ A unique phrase and oh so true. Another admired poem to be proud of, my friend.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/16/2023 7:00:00 PM

SV, Because of the reassuring statement you supplied, I owe you a great deal of gratitude. This is a new kind of free verse, which is a form that I enjoy creating, especially when it incorporates themes associated with the natural world.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/16/2023 9:38:00 AM

There's always something about the last flower, its last petal, and the last leaf that clings to its branch. Good write, Lasaad.