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Imagism
A type of poetry that uses clear and direct statements in order to put an exact picture in the reader's head. A poem that is written using the imagism style should easily and quickly create visual images that tell the story.

She smiles, trying her best to suppress the pain, not wanting to upset me. But I see the strain collecting as tears in her eyes, her hand in mine, fingers entwined, we say nothing; words can't compete with touch. She looks gaunt, emaciated, and worn out, cancer cells are eating her from the inside out in a relentless attack that is killing her. And yet, she smiled; and I smiled back, though my heart is breaking, fighting back the tears that threaten to spill. She squeezes my hand, and I never want to let go, but I pray God will show mercy and soon set her soul free. There are no words to describe that feeling; it defies explanation. It must be felt to be understood. Her eyes close, and her breath fades to a final gasp; as her soul departs this world. And I cry, cursing cancer for the abomination it is, oblivious to all but its insidious crawl it took her life before my eyes and all I can do is cry. (Imagism) 6/03/2021 10/07/2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 16 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney

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Date: 10/22/2022 9:33:00 AM
Dear Emile, the intense grief expressed in your tragic poem touches me very deeply. The poignant power of your imagery is deep, emotional and evocative and brought me to the center of this sorrow. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2022 10:39:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/13/2022 8:03:00 PM
Emile, this is a heartrending poem, and the circumstances are truly devastating for anyone who has been through this. Your clear and direct statements capture the image. Congratulations on your win on Mile 16 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 17 has already started.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/14/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/7/2021 8:03:00 AM
This is beautiful and heartbreaking, tears.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/7/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, DM, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/1/2021 7:29:00 PM
fighting back the tears that threaten to spill. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/2/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2021 5:20:00 PM
Cancer is a beast. It causes so much suffering in our society. So many have been taken. It's... heartbreaking. Wonderful poem on a difficult subject. Stay well and God bless.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2021 5:34:00 PM
Thanks David, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2021 2:39:00 PM
How many times I have gone through similar experiences. As a pastor, I was often summoned to the bedside of the dying. Cancer is a monster that refuses to be tamed. Good writing, my friend, on a difficult subject.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2021 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Milt, you have a compassionate heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2021 11:04:00 AM
Hello Emile, yes cancer is a difficut illiness for the person that has it. It is hard on the whole family. I know this is imagisum. People that have family members that suffer from this illness suffer to. enjpy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2021 4:22:00 PM
Hello Emile, It is a hard illness to deal with. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2021 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I couldn't agree with you more my friend, Emile.

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