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FIERY RED FLAMING POEM - hOT pASSION aND rOMANCE - fOR aDULTS oNLY

Sizzling soft finger tips, 

Blaze gently across my body,

Feeling the hiss of her heat,

Steam rises as we entwine our limbs,

Burning lips trace my ear as she whispers of paradise,

Both longing for this heaven to last,

Love sears our hearts as desire leaps from eyes,

While two passions melt into one,

We fly together to ecstasy before a scarlet sunset.

Copyright © 2014 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved

"A poem to me is the essence of any thought,
Being built from its foundation into tower scraping sky.
It can fly like no other bird to places never seen,
Even spaceships can only dream of taking its place."

© 2014 Robert William Gruhn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/23/2014 1:28:00 AM
Lovely passionate write. Your first two lines were my favorite ones...as well as searing hearts. The heat is palpable. Liked the endnote as well. That in itself is a poem. Great write.
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 8/23/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Eileen, it is so nice to see a sincerely written commentary! ;))) Best personal regards, Robert
Date: 8/22/2014 9:57:00 PM
Robert this is a fine one that will likely be ignored. I give it a solid 7 my friend...
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 8/23/2014 11:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert, yes, I understand that this site is clique biased and extremely prudish, they are just lost in this fantasy that they compare to the great poets of the past, ooops, just kidding, all you have to do is look at the poems they choose for contest winners and 100 Best Poems from last month list they email to you, and oh, let's not forget the Best Poets List. ;))) Best personal regards, Robert