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Fickle February

In our valley, often called the hardest month breathes the fickle month of February, When even the most beautiful of snowfalls has lost all excitement Wind blows colder, and has a wild melancholy wail February is never monotonous, but promises one last final phase Where brooks running down the hill to the pond carry ice lace to the water below The woodpile, has now diminished, so that it no longer reaches the windowsill The crackle of the log on the fire will soon be silent, and we will one day miss that comforting sound Just as we will we soon miss the fragrance of the of hearty soup that simmers in a kettle on the back burner of the stove So often are we as fickle in our longings, as fickle as the fickle month of February

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Date: 3/2/2009 6:20:00 PM
Sounds like a fickled February to me...lol. Good imagery here. I can almost feel the fire and smell the soup...ahhhh. Boy do I miss my fireplace...
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Date: 3/2/2009 7:33:00 AM
Really beautiful imagery, Carrie, I could see this scene you painted so vividly for us. I love the description of "ice lace", so delicate sounding. The ending was just perfect, yep... we are often every bit as fickle, this was a great comparison. Have a good week and hope the sun melts any snow you got (we got almost a FOOT this weekend! hopefully a "hand" won't be next. hehe). Love, Amy
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Date: 3/1/2009 10:22:00 AM
This is one of my favorites...I just love it. I've always had a hard time with February..still wintr but some signs of spring. .BG
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:09:00 AM
A beautiful vignette Carie.A good word 'fickle' it can apply to any monthy here in England.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observtions
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Date: 3/1/2009 7:56:00 AM
How true this is... You never know what February might bring. Well written as usual for you. Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry. Many Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/1/2009 4:04:00 AM
I know what you mean. Yet the shortest month of the year. I often feel cheated of the last two to three days..lol..Great write. Continue to share.
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Date: 3/1/2009 1:37:00 AM
Being originally from the Midwest and spending time in the surrounding wilderness I could relate to this excellent imagery and poetic flow. Great write. Randy Biffany
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:55:00 PM
Carrie, this is absolutely lovely. Such beautiful visuals in this. The fire, the soup, wonderful homey (and comforting) feel. There is much wisdom in your words. Excellent poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/28/2009 3:53:00 PM
Carrie it reached 100 degrees in Uvalde, Texas yesterday about thirty miles from where I live and about 65 deg. today. Old saying around here if you don't like the weather just wait a minute. That last poem I posted was fiction, my lovely wife is still with me., I should have said so in a postscript. Thank you for all your wonderful comments and support and may God Bless, Ron
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Date: 2/28/2009 2:58:00 PM
Yes, it's that stoic acceptance that goes along with February. You have it exactly, Carrie. All the beauty of Christmas, the frost, the warm fire. You got it all kid, Very enjoyable. Love, daver
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Date: 2/28/2009 1:20:00 PM
Yes, we are fickle ones indeed. Beauty to every season/month. Before you know it, we will be complaining about the heat but at the same time enjoying the freedom of light clothes, the beauty of the beaches and lakes, and Margaritas on the patio! : ) February is indeed fickle, from teases of Spring to now a prediction of 6 inches of snow this Monday! An absolutely beautiful write. Love the comfort of home feeling with the kettle on the stove. Excellent read! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/28/2009 1:09:00 PM
Yes the month is very fickle....will change its mine in a minute..without warning..but February is also very comforting like your poetic voice express..a nice log indeed..crackling sound of a log..this is very comforting Carrie.
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Date: 2/28/2009 1:01:00 PM
Carrie, thank you for letting a Floridian appreciate the scorn Northerners feel for winter. (But I wish we could trade places for a while; love that white stuff!) Nice poem! Carolyn
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