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Felicity Gets Married

This is the last poem on the history of Felicity, a person I know from correspondence with a friend abroad. No relation of mine. In one year's time, I shall retire What is there to look for? Two of my daughters got married. They live quite far from me. Only Felicity remains, the middle one, The one I loved most. Mind you I paid for a grand wedding for both of them. No favouritism would impede me from Granting their wishes., but living far I rarely see them especially as babies came To brighten our humdrum life. But where was Felicity? She spent so much time At the hospital, except for our usual Sunday lunch. Until one Sunday, a bomb blasted my brains. Felicity had a fiancée, whom she invited To our Sunday lunch. Was I angry? Confused? He was a comely fellow, a brain surgeon to boot. He promised to buy a house adjoining mine, And a door would join both our houses. Soon Felicity got married and what a wedding I paid. They were the happiest couple on earth. And soon she gave birth to a bundle of joy. From that day on I did not act as a father But a nanny for my lovely grandson.

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Date: 10/13/2023 12:04:00 PM
Hi Victor. You are such a wonderful story teller with clarity and coherence. You ended this story on a positive note that gives a smile. Thus, this is a feel good entry, Thank you for sharing your writing talent Victor. Have a wonderful night and weekend. Love Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)
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Date: 10/3/2023 3:09:00 PM
A very well written story, Victor. I like reading happy stories, I read so much negative nonsense in the news. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 10/2/2023 6:14:00 AM
Ah, I really love the idea of joining the two houses and the heartwarming emotions that you've poured in this write.. So saccharine and sumptuous.. Felicity is definitely lucky to have such a caring husband and such an adorable father.. Also she gave birth to a bundle of joy! Wow! A very interesting write Victor, this made me feel so much.. Enjoyed reading this, as always :)
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:34:00 PM
A delightful read.
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Date: 10/1/2023 3:19:00 AM
A lovely story Victor, a happy outcome for Felicity and her father too… Belle
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Date: 9/30/2023 12:30:00 PM
Such loveliness in this tale Victor! Cuddles….Debx
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Date: 9/30/2023 11:10:00 AM
ah, what a lovely story Victor, this reads like a true one, :)
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Date: 9/30/2023 6:33:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Great son-in-law to have who would join the two houses to make one home but also privacy. Great fictional work(maybe). Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/30/2023 4:03:00 AM
so lovely story, god bless her, yann have a nice sunday
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:44:00 PM
Very lovely poetry :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:28:00 PM
A beautiful poem of love and dedication to a father. What a fortunate man. I loved it from beginning to end dear Victor. Love and hugs
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Date: 9/29/2023 7:32:00 PM
Enjoy your days..not one of us has insurance or God’s promise that we will wake tomorrow. So live this day as though it were your very last… My daughter worked, so I had great glorious 8 yeaars with Eddie after school and on Sundays, Now he is 6’2”, 17, drives to his High school football homecoming game tonite. My Daugherty is here four days a week, We are blessed. Pangie x I live 10 minutes away from my family.
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Date: 9/29/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thanks for explaining. It was quit imaginative and dreamy.I related to it becaus of my sister whos name is similar.
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Date: 9/29/2023 3:08:00 PM
A delightful, honest, revealing slice of your life -- I think most of us grandparents and great grands, as I, can relate. Sounds like your grandchild is always near to keep you company. Make him a poet! Could not have a better teacher. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:36:00 PM
What a heartwarming story filled with vibrant emotions and delightful moments of familial love and bliss! Every child is blessed to have a grandfather as their nanny. Your Felicity stories are truly cherished and adored!
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:30:00 PM
Your poem exudes love for the daughter and especially for the grandson. Kindred voice to your poem, Victor, dwelling in joy. A story so well told!
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:15:00 PM
It's nice to have friends abroad who have such interesting lives to write about, like you did, Victor. Wonderful read. My grandfather would make funny cartoon noises at me "abaleep abaleep, that's all folks" as I lay in my crib. I loved that, giggling. I too a middle daughter!
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:53:00 AM
What a happy tale of family love and joy! Any child is lucky to have a grandpa for a nanny. I love your Felicity stories. :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:59:00 AM
Sweet and beautiful, you are a great story teller, Victor
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:37:00 AM
tears, reminded me of Roper, as he too be came a nanny to our granddaughter. Totally enjoyed reading. a fav.
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:54:00 AM
A sweet story. So no more Felicity?
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:17:00 AM
An interesting story.... dear Victor. Grandparents enjoy being nannies to their grand children. Glad that Felicity is enjoying marital bliss with her little one and husband and staying so close to her father.
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Date: 9/29/2023 8:30:00 AM
Aww…so sweet! A joy to your heart! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 9/29/2023 7:09:00 AM
- "she gave birth to a bundle of joy" :))) ... lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 9/29/2023 4:26:00 AM
So beautifully expressed and written. Its never easy when kids grow up, move on in their lives, with their partners etc. a great parent you are, did all you can for their happiness and still doing: beautiful write about felicity too. Great friend you are to them. Stay blessed Victor. Sending you light always
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