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Do not let me hear you sigh It will only make me cry. Subtle feelings run so deep Cannot bear to see you weep. THIRD PLACE WINNER November 8, 2021 "Bite Size Poem #26" Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/26/2021 11:47:00 AM
The beauty of your empathy shines in this deep, beautiful and rhythmic poem, Milton. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/26/2021 11:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan. I really appreciate your comments. You are always so encouraging!
Date: 11/22/2021 5:46:00 PM
Great, congrats. A lot of creativity packed into 4 lines. Difficult form, well done.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 8:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Peter. I appreciated your read and your comment.
Date: 11/19/2021 3:47:00 PM
Enjoyed the rhyme and deep emotion, congrats.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Karen.
Date: 11/19/2021 9:13:00 AM
Sharing another's sadness is truly beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:08:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Ann. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Date: 11/19/2021 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely yet sad write/win. "Love It" Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:08:00 PM
Thanks, Paula.
Date: 11/19/2021 6:05:00 AM
So beautiful of a friendship! Love this! Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for your warm thoughts, Kim.
Date: 11/18/2021 10:28:00 PM
"Subtle feelings run so deep" - True. Great poem! Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. I appreciate your reads.
Date: 11/18/2021 10:17:00 PM
How caring, how sweet.. And congratulations on your placement
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:09:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 11/18/2021 9:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Milton. Congrats ~
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/23/2021 9:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line.
Date: 11/19/2020 6:54:00 AM
short, subtle and so full of meaning.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/19/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Pauline.
Date: 11/19/2020 5:19:00 AM
So much emotions you expressed in just a few words. Well done!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/19/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay. I enjoyed trying it.
Date: 11/19/2020 4:35:00 AM
I've never tried this form. You did it so well. God bless you with many more.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/19/2020 8:17:00 AM
Hi Regina, thanks for your comment. It's a bit more difficult than it looks, but it was fun trying to write one. Give it a go!
Date: 11/18/2020 7:15:00 PM
Descriptive and full of caring emotions! Janice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/18/2020 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. Writing a jueju that makes sense is challenging. I was giving it a try! I appreciate your reading and commenting.

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