Feeling Nostalgic

how i miss
the dark calm
of our hideout
where we would
share our secrets
and feel safe

time stood still
in our cocoon
where life seemed
simpler



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Poteet Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 3:26 AM
with no TV or digital devices ... neat thoughts here, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:29 AM
how times have changed ~
Sharp Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Very brief, but very emotive; nicely written, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, Lawrence, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
Mchattie Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Takes me back to our little fort in the woods. Great poem. Have a good day.
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 8:38 AM
So glad it brought that out in you. Have a wonderful day, David.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Lovely, sweet ink; I'm sure many will connect with this one. xomo
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Most appreciated.
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