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FEEL ME


Tender thoughts Of you each day, Upon a bed of dreams I lay. Can you feel me when I call? Here’s my heart, take it all. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 2017 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 3/23/2019 7:09:00 PM
Comfortable expression of comfortable love from a loveable mindset. good work Carole.
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Date: 12/2/2017 7:55:00 PM
Congrats on My Warrior, Carole. (just now seeing the little note you left me over a month ago!)
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:10:00 AM
Excellent imagery ...........i like such poems where you describe yourself by talking something else.............wonderful....i am saving it as a reference.........
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/13/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Muhammad. I am honored. :) Carole Duet
Date: 10/21/2017 8:46:00 PM
"Upon a bed of dreams I lay" is great verse. Nice use of metonymy.
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/23/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. Now if I only knew what "metonymy" was!! Lol. Carole Duet
Date: 10/18/2017 4:57:00 PM
This is precious, Carole. Is it for one of the recent contests? You said you got a second place recently. Which contest was that?
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/18/2017 11:22:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Glad you liked "Feel Me". It was for a contest but I didn't even place. :( lol Oh well...I don't really care anyway. The one I won a 2nd place for was Brian Strand's October Standard contest and the poem was "My Warrior". Carole :D
Date: 10/1/2017 11:15:00 AM
This is a favorite! Very well written. I considered it a favorite before I even realized it was an acrostic! Only five lines and yet so erotic and deep. 7X7 Thank you so much for sharing!.........Pat
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/4/2017 11:35:00 PM
Thank you, Pat. A fav? Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. :D Carole Duet
Date: 9/27/2017 9:38:00 PM
Very tender - well crafted
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/4/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thank you, Line. I'm glad you dropped by. Carole Duet
Date: 9/22/2017 8:12:00 AM
A very touching tender acrostic write Carole; says so much in a few lines!~Che :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/23/2017 12:03:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl, and thanks for reading. Carole Duet
Date: 9/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
Beautiful short write.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/4/2017 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, James, and thanks for reading. Carole Duet
Date: 8/24/2017 2:35:00 AM
What a wonderful Acostic Carole, a form that I am not familiar with but you have mastered well my dear friend...Maria
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Carole Duet
Date: 8/24/2017 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maria. Sometimes I am inspired! Carole Duet
Date: 8/7/2017 8:56:00 PM
I took it.... it's beautiful... Thank you..
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Carole Duet
Date: 8/24/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, Pashang. You are very kind. Carole Duet
Date: 7/31/2017 8:28:00 PM
I have returned to feel your words again! Can't wait until your next post! Till then, Sionnach
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Carole Duet
Date: 8/2/2017 11:37:00 PM
I'm sooo glad! ;)
Date: 7/15/2017 11:51:00 AM
Clever acrostic Carole..
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/16/2017 9:47:00 PM
P.S. It wasn't "clever" though. It was just how I felt and the poem just came to me 1st thing when I woke up one morning. Carole
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/16/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you S1. I'm glad you liked it. Carole
Date: 7/12/2017 2:42:00 PM
Oh, this is pretty! Absolutely love it! Well done Carole. - Dean
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/12/2017 9:22:00 PM
Well, thank you, Dean. I'm glad you liked it..Carole Duet
Date: 7/10/2017 11:18:00 PM
...and a lovely rhyme as well.
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/12/2017 9:18:00 PM
Hi James! So glad you liked my acrostic (with rhyme). :) Carole Duet
Date: 7/10/2017 5:05:00 PM
well my first comment on soup for six months,,time being a factor,,,but glad i came along, this is a awesome poem,,going to your first post on soup now, and hope to catch more later..harry
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/12/2017 9:18:00 PM
Hi Harry! I'm so glad you liked this poem. Thank you too for the visit. Carole Duet
Date: 7/9/2017 3:33:00 PM
what a lovely acrostic Carole:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/9/2017 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I'm glad you liked it. :) Carole
Date: 7/6/2017 9:30:00 AM
What a sweet little acrostic it brought a smile to my face this morning.
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/7/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thank you, Edward. I really appreciate all your comments. :) Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 5:25:00 AM
Carole, you have the mastery to write succinct yet so impactful! I love this enough to fave it! I hope it gets the recognition it deserves! : )
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. And you "faved" it? Thanks again. I am flattered. :) Carole
Date: 7/2/2017 10:49:00 PM
lovely romantic acrostic, Carole. Well done!
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Date: 7/3/2017 10:59:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Carole
Date: 7/2/2017 10:18:00 PM
Short ,sweet and beautifully descriptive Carole. I love it...Maria
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:59:00 PM
Thanks, Maria. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)
Date: 7/2/2017 10:14:00 PM
SIMPLY SWEET AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND. What lover does not want to hear those sweet words- "Here's my heart, take it all"?
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/4/2017 11:46:00 AM
Yes and not just in waking hours of morn, but also middle of the night hours too. I have even pulled over off the road (day or night) to write down an opening verse, a stanza or even a short poem that simply came to me in a flash. I now have to or else I forget.. Sent you a pm, on joining your Poetry for Peace initiative. Poem is already posted here as well.
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. I woke up one morning and it was the first thing that came into my mind. So, I jumped up and wrote it down. And, I bet you've done the same thing. haha Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2017 2:13:00 PM
- Simply beautiful, Carole - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. Hugs backatcha! Carole
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :D
Date: 7/1/2017 7:20:00 AM
This is wonderful and touching, Carole, love the way you incorporated rhyme in it:)
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)
Date: 6/28/2017 10:13:00 AM
How couldn't anyone not hear your call dearest Carole when it is so tender and loving? Lucky would be the winner who will be blessed to take it all! Excellent poem! Touched the chord of my heart!
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/29/2017 1:58:00 AM
Well thank you so much, Demetrios! You've made me smile! :)
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