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Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2019 3:08:00 PM

Short, but very expressive, Carole. Lovely mixture of Acrostic & Rhyme. I hope the offering of your heart is reciprocated! ~ Best regards // paul

Carole Duet
Date: 6/27/2019 11:42:00 AM

Thanks for your nice comment on "Feel Me", Rick, but NO, my heart was broken...but I'll live. Carole :D

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 3/23/2019 7:09:00 PM

Comfortable expression of comfortable love from a loveable mindset. good work Carole.

Carole Duet
Date: 3/25/2019 2:53:00 PM

Hello Okonkwo! Thanks for your reading and lovely comment on "Feel Me". Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2017 7:55:00 PM

Congrats on My Warrior, Carole. (just now seeing the little note you left me over a month ago!)

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 11/8/2017 1:10:00 AM

Excellent imagery ...........i like such poems where you describe yourself by talking something else.............wonderful....i am saving it as a reference.........

Carole Duet
Date: 11/13/2017 2:58:00 PM

Thank you, Muhammad. I am honored. :) Carole Duet

Ricky Muse

Date: 10/21/2017 8:46:00 PM

"Upon a bed of dreams I lay" is great verse. Nice use of metonymy.

Carole Duet
Date: 10/23/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. Now if I only knew what "metonymy" was!! Lol. Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2017 4:57:00 PM

This is precious, Carole. Is it for one of the recent contests? You said you got a second place recently. Which contest was that?

Carole Duet
Date: 10/18/2017 11:22:00 PM

Hi Andrea! Glad you liked "Feel Me". It was for a contest but I didn't even place. :( lol Oh well...I don't really care anyway. The one I won a 2nd place for was Brian Strand's October Standard contest and the poem was "My Warrior". Carole :D

Pat Adams

Date: 10/1/2017 11:15:00 AM

This is a favorite! Very well written. I considered it a favorite before I even realized it was an acrostic! Only five lines and yet so erotic and deep. 7X7 Thank you so much for sharing!.........Pat

Carole Duet
Date: 10/4/2017 11:35:00 PM

Thank you, Pat. A fav? Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. :D Carole Duet

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/27/2017 9:38:00 PM

Very tender - well crafted

Carole Duet
Date: 10/4/2017 11:34:00 PM

Thank you, Line. I'm glad you dropped by. Carole Duet

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/22/2017 8:12:00 AM

A very touching tender acrostic write Carole; says so much in a few lines!~Che :)

Carole Duet
Date: 9/23/2017 12:03:00 AM

Thank you, Cheryl, and thanks for reading. Carole Duet

James Inman

Date: 9/4/2017 10:05:00 AM

Beautiful short write.

Carole Duet
Date: 9/4/2017 2:40:00 PM

Thank you, James, and thanks for reading. Carole Duet

Maria Williams

Date: 8/24/2017 2:35:00 AM

What a wonderful Acostic Carole, a form that I am not familiar with but you have mastered well my dear friend...Maria

Carole Duet
Date: 8/24/2017 8:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maria. Sometimes I am inspired! Carole Duet

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/7/2017 8:56:00 PM

I took it.... it's beautiful... Thank you..

Carole Duet
Date: 8/24/2017 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Pashang. You are very kind. Carole Duet

White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 8:28:00 PM

I have returned to feel your words again! Can't wait until your next post! Till then, Sionnach

Carole Duet
Date: 8/2/2017 11:37:00 PM

I'm sooo glad! ;)

Silent One

Date: 7/15/2017 11:51:00 AM

Clever acrostic Carole..

Carole Duet
Date: 7/16/2017 9:47:00 PM

P.S. It wasn't "clever" though. It was just how I felt and the poem just came to me 1st thing when I woke up one morning. Carole

Carole Duet
Date: 7/16/2017 9:43:00 PM

Thank you S1. I'm glad you liked it. Carole

Dean Wood

Date: 7/12/2017 2:42:00 PM

Oh, this is pretty! Absolutely love it! Well done Carole. - Dean

Carole Duet
Date: 7/12/2017 9:22:00 PM

Well, thank you, Dean. I'm glad you liked it..Carole Duet

James Inman

Date: 7/10/2017 11:18:00 PM

...and a lovely rhyme as well.

Carole Duet
Date: 7/12/2017 9:18:00 PM

Hi James! So glad you liked my acrostic (with rhyme). :) Carole Duet

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/10/2017 5:05:00 PM

well my first comment on soup for six months,,time being a factor,,,but glad i came along, this is a awesome poem,,going to your first post on soup now, and hope to catch more later..harry

Carole Duet
Date: 7/12/2017 9:18:00 PM

Hi Harry! I'm so glad you liked this poem. Thank you too for the visit. Carole Duet

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2017 3:33:00 PM

what a lovely acrostic Carole:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet
Date: 7/9/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I'm glad you liked it. :) Carole

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/6/2017 9:30:00 AM

What a sweet little acrostic it brought a smile to my face this morning.

Carole Duet
Date: 7/7/2017 11:11:00 PM

Thank you, Edward. I really appreciate all your comments. :) Carole Duet

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/3/2017 5:25:00 AM

Carole, you have the mastery to write succinct yet so impactful! I love this enough to fave it! I hope it gets the recognition it deserves! : )

Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 11:03:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. And you "faved" it? Thanks again. I am flattered. :) Carole

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2017 10:49:00 PM

lovely romantic acrostic, Carole. Well done!

Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:59:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Carole

Maria Williams

Date: 7/2/2017 10:18:00 PM

Short ,sweet and beautifully descriptive Carole. I love it...Maria

Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:59:00 PM

Thanks, Maria. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/2/2017 10:14:00 PM

SIMPLY SWEET AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND. What lover does not want to hear those sweet words- "Here's my heart, take it all"?

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/4/2017 11:46:00 AM

Yes and not just in waking hours of morn, but also middle of the night hours too. I have even pulled over off the road (day or night) to write down an opening verse, a stanza or even a short poem that simply came to me in a flash. I now have to or else I forget.. Sent you a pm, on joining your Poetry for Peace initiative. Poem is already posted here as well.

Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:53:00 PM

Thanks, Robert. I woke up one morning and it was the first thing that came into my mind. So, I jumped up and wrote it down. And, I bet you've done the same thing. haha Carole Duet

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/1/2017 2:13:00 PM

- Simply beautiful, Carole - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 10:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. Hugs backatcha! Carole

Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2017 10:39:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :D

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/1/2017 7:20:00 AM

This is wonderful and touching, Carole, love the way you incorporated rhyme in it:)

Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2017 11:52:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)