Feel Me

Tender thoughts 
Of you each day,
Upon a bed of dreams I lay.
Can you feel me when I call?
Here’s my heart, take it all.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2017
"All Rights Reserved"

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Paul Callus

June 21, 2019 at 3:08 PM

Short, but very expressive, Carole. Lovely mixture of Acrostic & Rhyme. I hope the offering of your heart is reciprocated! ~ Best regards // paul

Carole Duet

June 27, 2019 at 11:42 AM

Thanks for your nice comment on "Feel Me", Rick, but NO, my heart was broken...but I'll live. Carole :D

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

March 23, 2019 at 7:09 PM

Comfortable expression of comfortable love from a loveable mindset. good work Carole.

Carole Duet

March 25, 2019 at 2:53 PM

Hello Okonkwo! Thanks for your reading and lovely comment on "Feel Me". Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

December 2, 2017 at 7:55 PM

Congrats on My Warrior, Carole. (just now seeing the little note you left me over a month ago!)

Muhammad Imtiaz

November 8, 2017 at 1:10 AM

Excellent imagery ...........i like such poems where you describe yourself by talking something else.............wonderful....i am saving it as a reference.........

Carole Duet

November 13, 2017 at 2:58 PM

Thank you, Muhammad. I am honored. :) Carole Duet

Richard Evans

October 21, 2017 at 8:46 PM

"Upon a bed of dreams I lay" is great verse. Nice use of metonymy.

Carole Duet

October 23, 2017 at 10:21 AM

Thank you, Richard. Now if I only knew what "metonymy" was!! Lol. Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich

October 18, 2017 at 4:57 PM

This is precious, Carole. Is it for one of the recent contests? You said you got a second place recently. Which contest was that?

Carole Duet

October 18, 2017 at 11:22 PM

Hi Andrea! Glad you liked "Feel Me". It was for a contest but I didn't even place. :( lol Oh well...I don't really care anyway. The one I won a 2nd place for was Brian Strand's October Standard contest and the poem was "My Warrior". Carole :D

Pat Adams

October 1, 2017 at 11:15 AM

This is a favorite! Very well written. I considered it a favorite before I even realized it was an acrostic! Only five lines and yet so erotic and deep. 7X7 Thank you so much for sharing!.........Pat

Carole Duet

October 4, 2017 at 11:35 PM

Thank you, Pat. A fav? Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. :D Carole Duet

Line Gauthier

September 27, 2017 at 9:38 PM

Very tender - well crafted

Carole Duet

October 4, 2017 at 11:34 PM

Thank you, Line. I'm glad you dropped by. Carole Duet

Cheryl Hoffman

September 22, 2017 at 8:12 AM

A very touching tender acrostic write Carole; says so much in a few lines!~Che :)

Carole Duet

September 23, 2017 at 12:03 AM

Thank you, Cheryl, and thanks for reading. Carole Duet

James Inman

September 4, 2017 at 10:05 AM

Beautiful short write.

Carole Duet

September 4, 2017 at 2:40 PM

Thank you, James, and thanks for reading. Carole Duet

Maria Williams

August 24, 2017 at 2:35 AM

What a wonderful Acostic Carole, a form that I am not familiar with but you have mastered well my dear friend...Maria

Carole Duet

August 24, 2017 at 8:45 PM

Thank you so much, Maria. Sometimes I am inspired! Carole Duet

Pashang Salehi

August 7, 2017 at 8:56 PM

I took it.... it's beautiful... Thank you..

Carole Duet

August 24, 2017 at 8:44 PM

Thank you, Pashang. You are very kind. Carole Duet

White Wolf

July 31, 2017 at 8:28 PM

I have returned to feel your words again! Can't wait until your next post! Till then, Sionnach

Carole Duet

August 2, 2017 at 11:37 PM

I'm sooo glad! ;)

Silent One

July 15, 2017 at 11:51 AM

Clever acrostic Carole..

Carole Duet

July 16, 2017 at 9:47 PM

P.S. It wasn't "clever" though. It was just how I felt and the poem just came to me 1st thing when I woke up one morning. Carole

Carole Duet

July 16, 2017 at 9:43 PM

Thank you S1. I'm glad you liked it. Carole

Dean Wood

July 12, 2017 at 2:42 PM

Oh, this is pretty! Absolutely love it! Well done Carole. - Dean

Carole Duet

July 12, 2017 at 9:22 PM

Well, thank you, Dean. I'm glad you liked it..Carole Duet

James Inman

July 10, 2017 at 11:18 PM

...and a lovely rhyme as well.

Carole Duet

July 12, 2017 at 9:18 PM

Hi James! So glad you liked my acrostic (with rhyme). :) Carole Duet

Harry Horsman

July 10, 2017 at 5:05 PM

well my first comment on soup for six months,,time being a factor,,,but glad i came along, this is a awesome poem,,going to your first post on soup now, and hope to catch more later..harry

Carole Duet

July 12, 2017 at 9:18 PM

Hi Harry! I'm so glad you liked this poem. Thank you too for the visit. Carole Duet

Jan Allison

July 9, 2017 at 3:33 PM

what a lovely acrostic Carole:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet

July 9, 2017 at 5:25 PM

Thank you, Jan. I'm glad you liked it. :) Carole

Edward Mccall

July 6, 2017 at 9:30 AM

What a sweet little acrostic it brought a smile to my face this morning.

Carole Duet

July 7, 2017 at 11:11 PM

Thank you, Edward. I really appreciate all your comments. :) Carole Duet

Connie Marcum Wong

July 3, 2017 at 5:25 AM

Carole, you have the mastery to write succinct yet so impactful! I love this enough to fave it! I hope it gets the recognition it deserves! : )

Carole Duet

July 3, 2017 at 11:03 PM

Thank you, Connie. And you "faved" it? Thanks again. I am flattered. :) Carole

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2017 at 10:49 PM

lovely romantic acrostic, Carole. Well done!

Carole Duet

July 3, 2017 at 10:59 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Carole

Maria Williams

July 2, 2017 at 10:18 PM

Short ,sweet and beautifully descriptive Carole. I love it...Maria

Carole Duet

July 3, 2017 at 10:59 PM

Thanks, Maria. So glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)

Robert Lindley

July 2, 2017 at 10:14 PM

SIMPLY SWEET AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND. What lover does not want to hear those sweet words- "Here's my heart, take it all"?

Robert Lindley

July 4, 2017 at 11:46 AM

Yes and not just in waking hours of morn, but also middle of the night hours too. I have even pulled over off the road (day or night) to write down an opening verse, a stanza or even a short poem that simply came to me in a flash. I now have to or else I forget.. Sent you a pm, on joining your Poetry for Peace initiative. Poem is already posted here as well.

Carole Duet

July 3, 2017 at 10:53 PM

Thanks, Robert. I woke up one morning and it was the first thing that came into my mind. So, I jumped up and wrote it down. And, I bet you've done the same thing. haha Carole Duet