Feeding At Daybreak

Ducks in the tall grass The new spring stalks bend and sway A glimpse of green head

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James Fraser

Date: 6/14/2009 11:21:00 AM

Delightful Haiku, ducks are so cute>>James

Date: 3/27/2009 9:37:00 AM

This one has me smiling. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for taking time to comment on my blog and haiku. Thank you for your prayers. I put an update on my blog. Things look good so far for West Fargo. Others have not been so fortunate. Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 6:51:00 PM

Nice haiku Beeg, you captured a glimpse of peace.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/21/2009 4:02:00 PM

vivid! makes me yearn for summer, great haiku! and thanks for your comments, Barbara! Jim

Brian Strand

Date: 3/19/2009 1:24:00 AM

Excellent imagery BG Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2009 9:07:00 PM

Check your Soup Mail, Barbara.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2009 9:03:00 PM

What a striking image you convey, Barbara! Right now, I'd give anything to see those tall stalks swaying. Absolutely beautiful! Carolyn

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/18/2009 9:11:00 AM

I like this vision of spring ... refreshing!

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/18/2009 5:14:00 AM

Wonderful imagery. Pretty to see. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/17/2009 11:50:00 PM

Wonderful haiku, ducks are fun to feed, but sometimes they get feisty...Raul

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/17/2009 6:56:00 PM

I was traveling a few hours from home the other day and I saw this on a pond in the Flint Hills in Kansas. There is very little out there to look at other than nature at its best. Your words have captured it so well that the momory came back to me. It was truly a beautiful site to see in the vast open and rolling hills of prairie grass. Thank you for reminding me and allowing me to share. Great write! Smiles from Lolita