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Fear - Shakespearean Style

Fear Bleed not into thy vein nor graze thine heart stealing away thou's love tonight

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2017 4:19:00 PM

Short, meaningful and truly poetic, Tim. Love is not to be feared....even if sometimes one fears the loss of love! Regards // paul

Darren White

Date: 3/21/2017 10:29:00 AM

I love the Shakespeare in you, you do it so well... Can I steal some of your courage for a little while?

Barry Stebbings

Date: 3/21/2017 5:14:00 AM

Great Shakespearean phrasing Tim. Works well in this form. // Barry

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/20/2017 9:03:00 PM

I love the Shakespeare in you Tim...you wear it very well dear sir :-) blessings, lynn

Sara Ella

Date: 3/20/2017 9:00:00 PM

Love the use of Shakespeare in this - I read it with the staged accent. It is perfect, especially read aloud. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2017 6:53:00 PM

I like free verse short like this but with a classic feel!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/20/2017 1:59:00 PM

i have to tell ole william that someone else has taken his place... superb medieval song, tim.. huggs

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/20/2017 12:13:00 PM

Hello Tim. You bet Shakespearean Style in voice and language and theme as well. Your poetic skill shines here. When it comes to love may fear vanish. Well done entirely.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/20/2017 9:22:00 AM

May fear never blind anyone from seeing true joy and finding love.Beautiful.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/20/2017 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Charma....The echos of thunder were a little fearful but I knew I was safe

Chris Green

Date: 3/20/2017 9:03:00 AM

This was really nice Tim. A nice wish for one you care for that fear not invade their happiness.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/20/2017 11:35:00 AM

Thanks Chris...Good to see you back

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/20/2017 6:07:00 AM

We need not fear for we are never alone. And love is indeed the answer Tim. A good one! 7 ; )

Tim Smith
Date: 3/20/2017 11:34:00 AM

Thank you Connie