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Faux-Fur

Sans seed - it’s not Spring now - green grass concealed. Cute, cuddly happiness with floppy ears. White rabbits leap, in the fluffy snow field, when the zephyr and flower disappears. Plush wings that sink into the angel-snow. Flapping in the thirst-quenching cold, faux-fur envelopes limbs with a diamond glow. Flurries dash from above, brighten dark fir. Buried halfway - barrow and bicycles, shrubs and bushes, and children of small size. Melting ice reshapes into icicles - nature’s decoration delights the eyes. 1/17/2023 12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 2/5/2023 3:35:00 AM
A mesmerizing imagery of winter this is my dear friend Kim. I wish we've winter here even once. Congratulations on your win and this stellar write! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2023 5:45:00 AM
God bless you too, Len! Thank you so much!
Date: 1/25/2023 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Cold days need a cup of hot chocolate. Have a great day..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2023 5:45:00 AM
Hot chocolate or coffee ;) One for me, one for my grand. Stay warm, Paula. Thank you!
Date: 1/25/2023 6:35:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2023 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 1/24/2023 6:29:00 PM
Kim, sweet imagery in this one, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 9:05:00 PM
Thank you, Tania! :)
Date: 1/18/2023 9:12:00 AM
Looking forward to bunnies and blooms. Cute lines, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2023 12:43:00 PM
Yes! Thank you, Jenna!
Date: 1/18/2023 2:27:00 AM
What a terrific optimistic poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2023 12:43:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 1/17/2023 7:50:00 PM
Pretty picture here, Kim... and so glad I've only seen it once this Chicago 'winter' so far. Nicer to read about it in one of your poems!! Thanks, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 1/17/2023 9:10:00 AM
"buried halfway...children of small size." Quite the picture Kim - a visual stimulation indeed! I like it. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! Appreciate you!
Date: 1/17/2023 7:03:00 AM
This is really beautiful, Kim! Excellent use of imagery, as well as lyrical expression. I enjoyed reading it today
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
Date: 1/17/2023 6:16:00 AM
Excellent imagery throughout, Kim. Beautiful winter hues your poem paints.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! I appreciate you! :)
Date: 1/17/2023 5:39:00 AM
Delightful! Great imagery and poetic expression. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2023 5:42:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joe!
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