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Fate of the Fallen

a lone leaf falls to find beneath tall trees. . . welcoming comrades

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:13:00 AM

shhhhh !Andrea, I'm here observing your old and new haiku. I want to see what the fuss is all about. This is deep, reads like a verse. LOL. SKAT

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2012 8:13:00 AM

Love the symbolism in this winning haiku, Andrea...hits home hard with me. Great patriotic haiku! Love, Gwendolen

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 3:46:00 PM

This is good, Andrea. I really like it. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:44:00 PM

congrats Andrea on an awesome win for these splendid words and imagery luv..

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/16/2012 5:40:00 PM

congrats on your haiku win andrea; this is a cutie, I like the image of the lone leaf falling to be welcomed by its comrades :-)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:08:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. Excellent. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:51:00 PM

ANDREA, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 5:22:00 AM

A belated congratulations Andrea on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol Wonderful to see you winning in these contests Andrea.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/25/2011 7:34:00 AM

So pretty and brief. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/25/2011 6:49:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on another great win in the contest with this dynamic piece my friend... oh enjoy another big win so well deserved..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2011 5:56:00 AM

Good one but don't know if it was a winner..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morning..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 2/6/2011 1:31:00 PM

This is a gem of a Haiku Andrea!!--kash

Constance La France

Date: 5/30/2010 9:43:00 AM

Beautiful words, Andrea, I have rated it a seven. I will be sending you a soup mail, in a minute. Constance

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/23/2010 10:49:00 PM

that leaf just wants a nature friend like him beside it, to warm him when he's lonely. thats sweet.you did well to portray it, good luck. -Always&Forever Lynette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2010 6:45:00 PM

Good imagination here Andrea, have your self a wonderful weekend.p.d.

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 4/23/2010 11:09:00 AM

OHH.ITS NOT LONE NO MORE. NICE POEM.CAESAR IS MY FIANCEE' IF U READ MY COMENT ON DANCE IT SAYS WE HAVE A BABY, HER NAME IS MILEY, SHE A NEW BORN bUfFy

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 4:13:00 AM

Very nice words for allen leaves, Andrea! And thank you for your comments. Wishing you good luck for the contest and a nice weekend...Love, Gert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:08:00 PM

A fine expression

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/22/2010 10:42:00 PM

A beautiful haiku Andrea. Best of luck in Raul's contest. I have too little time to post and make comments, but will do what I can. Love, Connie