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Farewell, Dear Nightbird ( Cowritten With Carolyn Devonshire )

You were but three inches tall that day When I heard you cry and ran outside To stand between you, my beloved owl And a swooping hawk, wings three-feet wide Little me, new born owl of the night Staying in my wooded habitat Being brave enough to venture out Golly, Ollie, thinking what was that Each night you have serenaded me But today I bring sad news, sweet friend I must move away and leave you here Our life together's about to end To part, but in different places The lovely times we shared together This so sad Barn Owl and his neighbour We two birds will always be tethered And when the moon overcomes the sun I'll listen for your cries o'er the waves Your gentle croon brought peace and comfort It's a memory my heart will save http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/carolyn.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/19/2009 5:47:00 PM
This is another wonderful collaborati, James! You and Carolyn write so beautifully together. I read "Tsunami Survivors" and it is such a wonderful poem filled with such touching sentiment. A book together, perhaps? Love, Robin
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:00:00 PM
Great Colaboration!... Enjoyed it immensely... Can See The Night, The Owl... The Tender care... The Goodbye MoonBee
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Date: 9/6/2009 4:51:00 AM
ow how did i miss this..........beautiful and the departure it is sad..yes a memory in the heart will last a lifetime--great job Fraser and Carolyn--charma
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Date: 9/3/2009 6:23:00 AM
Hooo....Hoooo! By golly this one brought a tear to my eye. Hats off to you Jim and your co-author, Carolyn. Love, daver
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Date: 9/3/2009 5:03:00 AM
James, This touched my heart very deeply. beautiful sentiments. The vision was extraordinaire. You and Carolyn make a wonderful writing team. Thank you for all your kind comments on my writing. Much appreciated. lainie
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Date: 9/2/2009 7:15:00 PM
stanzas shared with delight by us all! great work! Carolyn and James!...psss. you will honor your friend by helping another, I'm sure!....love, James
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Date: 9/2/2009 6:38:00 PM
Wonderful undertaking by two fine poetes,...I love it ,...Bravo ! Don't be surprised if you find your little friend has followed you my friend ! James
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Date: 9/2/2009 6:15:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration. The poem flows together so well--something difficult to achieve when writers work together. Nice job!!!! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:44:00 PM
I especially love the last stanza....filled with tenderness. ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:26:00 PM
lovely, nicely done, James and Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:01:00 PM
Dear James, it was wonderful taking a short break from packing to put together this farewell to my owl. I will miss him but, like you, he will be in my heart. Love writing with you! It gives me such joy. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:54:00 PM
Nice work you two, love the creativity.
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:48:00 PM
Hawk and Owl on separate shores. Interesting work you two. Sara
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