Farewell

skies with wavy steps draw a staircase from the south crow heads home to brood Written: May 06, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2022 9:13:00 PM

this is so cool, Sotto. In fact, amazing. Hey, thanks for my win in your contest and for the inspiration.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2022 7:56:00 PM

Superb imagery here, Lasaad. That 'crowded staircase' really set me thinking. A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon

Bill Baker

Date: 5/7/2022 3:08:00 PM

The poem brings back the imagery mentioned and the times I've seen the crows heading home. Thanks, Sotto

Valsa George

Date: 5/7/2022 2:01:00 AM

This is so lovely ! I see the crows heading back home by the twilight of the evening when clouds build steps in the sky

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/6/2022 7:27:00 PM

How wonderful this is, Lasaad, remines me when young, my mother pointing out the stairway to heaven when the sun shines through the clouds. Thanks for the poetry and the memory.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/6/2022 4:20:00 PM

Hello Lassad, as i rea\d this poem, i can vision this scene. Enjoy your evening my friend .Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2022 10:33:00 AM

Those crows have been quiet this morning so they must be brooding over the weather. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 5/6/2022 8:08:00 AM

Brooding skies and brooding bird You've spoke my friend the final word.Thanks for addition to our day.