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Fantasy of You

A smile is cast upon your sultry face as lover's glance makes way for love emblazed. With timid touch your breast my fingers trace in search of love's familiar urge unfazed. Your skin like silk pressed warm against my chest entices feelings longed for in my bed then with a kiss your love leaves me caressed with cloyed emotions, burning flames have fled. But lonely hearts, so filled with you, will break on lips as soft as heaven's sweet whipped cream. I taste your soul with every breath you take, when passion's hunger's lost within my dream, then dreams of you are all that I can see, for love for us, in truth, can never be. 08/02/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/4/2016 12:32:00 PM
oh I can sure relate to this one, my friend. VERY nice sonnet from you. Can't believe it got past me. I love it!
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 8/28/2016 1:48:00 AM
This is so beautiful to read. A7
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James Inman
Date: 8/28/2016 7:16:00 AM
A most kind comment Lewis, thank you.
Date: 8/18/2016 10:02:00 AM
Congrats on your 4th place...very touching...the last line, it gave the right twist to the sonnet. Enjoyed it. :) Sunita
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James Inman
Date: 8/18/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Sunita.
Date: 8/17/2016 8:33:00 PM
Great write! Passionate and skilfully written!
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James Inman
Date: 8/18/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Tom, that's me Mr. Passionate, HaHa, that's my wife laughing by way.
Date: 8/17/2016 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, James, very sensual and descriptive. Hugs Eve
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James Inman
Date: 8/18/2016 6:43:00 AM
Thanks for reading it Eve.
Date: 8/17/2016 3:08:00 PM
James, your Sonnet is so well-written and passionate, and with a great volta in your third stanza. Congratulations on your fine win in this 'surrender' Premiere contest! 7 Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 8/18/2016 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. There were so many excellent poems in this contest.
Date: 8/17/2016 12:35:00 PM
Hi James, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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James Inman
Date: 8/18/2016 6:36:00 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you for the nice comment, I enjoyed writing this one.

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