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Fantastical Dreamy Train Ride

When I was a girl we had a house near railroad tracks, And at night I loved the sound of the train whistle blowing; It was such a haunting sound, I wondered where it was going. Mother told me the first words I said were choo choo choo, I would sit by the window and imagine I was on that train; The huge diesel locomotive pulling me to far off places, I would have dreams of Paris. It was whimsical and fanciful, The Eiffel Tower and Notre Dame and The Louvre; And a quick stop in Vienna, home of Mozart and Beethovan, Oh all the magical places I could go on a whistling train. And then we would go to Rome, I wanted to say hello to the Pope. Then with a clung and a whistle we would go to England, And I would introduce myself to the Queen and have tea; In my reverie I was not alone, My companion was little Odele. She was just a tiny kitten that I tucked in my pocket, Then off we would go on our fantastical dreamy train ride. _________________________ July 29, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Fantastical Dreamy Train Ride Copyright Protected, ID 15-695-692-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym For the contest, Trains and Fantasy, sponsor, Mystic Rose First Place

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Date: 8/11/2015 11:17:00 PM
Cute...Paris is nice, I was warned the people were rude but they were kind :) Congrats :)
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Date: 8/11/2015 1:36:00 PM
Such a cute poem. I too listened to the whistle blowing from the train going thru. I always knew what time it was. And dreamed of far off places. Thanks for liking my Happeness poem :) congrats on your win !
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Date: 8/10/2015 11:47:00 PM
Congratulations, BROKEN... SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:36:00 AM
Lovely fantasy, BW. Reminds me of so many of mine.
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:12:00 AM
Wonderful imagery broken, a super 7, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/9/2015 5:21:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2015 1:10:00 PM
Wonderful write a 7 congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/9/2015 6:26:00 AM
Well done, Constance; I wore a smile for the whole of that journey! ;)
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Date: 7/29/2015 5:41:00 PM
A lovely and excellence write, I like how penned it and the imagery, it is so much funny......A.M.
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Date: 7/29/2015 5:15:00 PM
love this magical dreamy poem, my friend x
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Date: 7/29/2015 4:58:00 PM
What a charming write Broken wings - a magical mystery tour for sure - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx7
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