Fantastical Dreamy Train Ride


When I was a  girl we had a house near railroad tracks,
And at night I loved the sound of the train whistle blowing;
    It was such a haunting sound,
        I wondered where it was going.
Mother told me the first words I said were choo choo choo,
I would sit by the window and imagine I was on that train;
The huge diesel locomotive pulling me to far off places,
    I would have dreams of  Paris.
        It was whimsical and fanciful,
The Eiffel Tower and Notre Dame and The Louvre;
And a quick stop in Vienna, home of Mozart and Beethovan,
Oh all the magical places I could go on a whistling train.
    And then we would go to Rome,
        I wanted to say hello to the Pope.
Then with a clung and a whistle we would go to England,
And I would introduce myself to the Queen and have tea;
    In my reverie I was not alone,
        My companion was little Odele. 
She was just a tiny kitten that I tucked in my pocket,
Then off we would go on our fantastical dreamy train ride.

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July 29, 2015


Poetry/Verse/Fantastical Dreamy Train Ride
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For the contest, Trains and Fantasy, 
sponsor, Mystic Rose 

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ebbs Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 11:17 PM
Cute...Paris is nice, I was warned the people were rude but they were kind :) Congrats :)
Duncan Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Such a cute poem. I too listened to the whistle blowing from the train going thru. I always knew what time it was. And dreamed of far off places. Thanks for liking my Happeness poem :) congrats on your win !
A  Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 11:47 PM
Congratulations, BROKEN... SKAT
Inman Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Lovely fantasy, BW. Reminds me of so many of mine.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 1:12 AM
Wonderful imagery broken, a super 7, congrats on big win!
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:10 PM
Wonderful write a 7 congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Lindsay Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Well done, Constance; I wore a smile for the whole of that journey! ;)
Muideen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 5:41 PM
A lovely and excellence write, I like how penned it and the imagery, it is so much funny......A.M.
Horne Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 5:15 PM
love this magical dreamy poem, my friend x
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 4:58 PM
What a charming write Broken wings - a magical mystery tour for sure - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx7
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