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Famished and Bleeding This Old Soul Begs This

Famished And Bleeding This Old Soul Begs This Woe! Unto days numbered and grief sicken Love lost saddest of sorrows once stricken How in dear youth life was merry hours sought Now in Time's low fading death I am caught! Alas! Where hides that glory once so bright Its dancing gleams illuminating night Waking in Heavenly skies, moons rebirth From vast galaxies ancient Gods glowing mirth! I beg me, this moment to write to shine Another day to true-claim what is mine This creation to wondrously compose And declare love of poetry I chose! Mind's eye sees beyond that well hidden door From radiant dreams eager soul implores Touch of soft lips once sworn to be my all Memories fleeting, I beg deep recall! This heart crying for more, near its last throes Against curse of ill winds, darkness now blows Pan, bring cheering music, and sweetest wine Allow one more night, her love may I dine! Famished and bleeding this old soul begs this Sight of her blue eyes and lingering kiss Smell of her yellow gold hair, its soft curls Relief from this darkness death too soon hurls! Robert J. Lindley, 8-01- 2019 Rhyme, ( From Darken Door, A Poet's Last Vision )

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Date: 8/10/2019 7:03:00 PM
You do not have to declare love of poetry, Robert, all of your poems are a testament to that. Nicely done my friend!
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:51:00 PM
A breathtaking poem. I kept thinking back to Whitman's reference to.. Splendour in the Grass. I love that line but not sure what woks of his it comes from. This poem deserves to be a POTD. My recent one was awful in comparison. Love, Panagiota xx
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Date: 8/10/2019 5:08:00 PM
The smell of her yellow gold hair...for some reason adore the image!
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Date: 8/5/2019 12:28:00 PM
This is beautiful, Robert. You write with so much feeling that the reader finds himself involved in the emotions that flow throughout the poem. On reaching old age, the past takes on a wider and stronger meaning; no wonder the urge to relive it grips our soul. Best regards, my friend // paul
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Date: 8/5/2019 8:22:00 AM
Robert, this is an extraordinary poem for one writing in the 21st century - full redolent of the great 19th century poets. I find beauty, in its structure, wording, imagery and touching sadness. It is worthy of many readings, the which have and will be.
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Date: 8/2/2019 10:25:00 PM
Robert, this is stunning! Your feelings laid bare that seeks to return to days of youth where all things seem possible. This lovely poem is written in the style of the famous master poets and it is very moving and beautiful. Blessings, my friend xxoo
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Date: 8/2/2019 10:23:00 AM
Oh, Robert, so lovely as always.
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