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Falling

love takes my hand&I am drifting as we fly over gigantic mountains high &deep valleys lush&green- love caresses my flowing hair with his fingers &kisses my ruby lips &touches my rosy cheek , oh my heart is beating like a drum in the silence as I hold love to my heart, so afraid he will leave me again,& then, my dream is swirling&breaking into a thousand pieces &I am falling, falling . . . _________________________ August 6, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/Falling Copyright Protected, ID 20-1276-008-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (18) sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2020 2:50:00 AM

A lovely write Constance with so much emotion.

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2020 8:59:00 PM

Gary, thanks for the visit and the compliment _Constance

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/8/2020 8:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win!:)

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2020 9:00:00 PM

Brenda, thanks for the congrats _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:53:00 AM

so interesting. The many & symbols really made it sound like a dream. The way they just go on and on without your knowing where they will end up!! Love this. and Congrats for a great number placement in the contest!!

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2020 9:00:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

John Watt

Date: 8/7/2020 4:26:00 PM

Such an evocative write, Constance, with the powerful imagery of love followed by the sadness of falling at the end. Congratulations on your #1 win today, well-deserved! Hugs ~ John

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2020 9:01:00 PM

John, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/7/2020 5:08:00 AM

Very sad and dark as it is alluring too, Constance:)

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2020 9:01:00 PM

Jo, thanks so much for visiting my poem and commenting _Constance