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Fallen

Drop down Heaven sent, Catch me with your final breath One wish, To rule them all, Try your hardest to survive the fall Tick tock The clock is ticking Seemingly my hear it beating For you And now I'm screaming To get away From everything that you do To me Now I'm trying so hard to see The way you believe Believe in everything And I'm dying to hear you say You will love me everyday And I'm just dying to hear you say You will love me in every way So drop down Heaven sent, Take me away from this awful mess

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/17/2009 11:44:00 AM
Lovely rhymed poem Monica>>James
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Date: 7/11/2009 11:29:00 AM
Monica, there is a lovely simplicity to this. The rhyming scheme, whilst nothing unique in the actual word sounds, is very powerful within the framework of this poem. I think that there is a strong musicality to this and that is strange seeing as the line length appears haphazard. It is an excellent piece of poetry and an excellent use of rhyme.
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Date: 7/9/2009 6:46:00 PM
this sounds familiar. hahaha. thanks for the song love
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