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Fall Into Me

Fall into me like brown autumn leaf Melting my red heart at your touch Ebony eyes your demise gracefully As gravity green pulls us my love Fall into my kinetic kiss Finding yourself like licorice Sweet yet salty in bluesy bliss For fall is a season such as this Fall for my heavy hips and thighs My chocolate lips with cranberry cries That sweep in breeze as feet walk by Seasonal lover this is our time.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 9:33:00 AM

Super sweet, romantic fall write Karen. Great job! :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/30/2023 11:04:00 AM

You are too kind. Thanks you Linda!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/27/2023 11:01:00 AM

this is very good Karen pleasure to visit your page hugs Shadow

Karen Jones
Date: 10/27/2023 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Shadow

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/22/2023 4:35:00 PM

Delicious and delectable, Karen, and ever so romantic! Congratulations on your win! Blessings

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2023 6:17:00 PM

Thanks Sam! Hugs love and light to you.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/22/2023 12:26:00 PM

I love this poem my friend, and in particular your second stanza is breath taking. Your talent is evident. Congratulations. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2023 1:51:00 PM

Your words are so kind Jennifer! Love light and hugs to you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/22/2023 11:57:00 AM

Ooh love your wording… Finding yourself like licorice Sweet yet salty in bluesy bliss… My chocolate lips with cranberry cries…Congratulations!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2023 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Kim! Hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/22/2023 3:13:00 AM

Very sweet and romantic, Karen, with apt words chosen to create unique images, lovely:) congratulations:)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2023 3:33:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by Joanna.

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 11:02:00 PM

Aloha, Karen! A charming romp that was wondrously portrayed as your words prompt a wealthy rendition, my friend! A righteous win in Brian's contest. Cheers and Mahalo, William

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 11:16:00 PM

William thanks so much!

Fire Bird

Date: 10/21/2023 9:27:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem! Congratulations on the placement in the contest NO 1251 NEW POEM ONLY! - Phoenix :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 9:40:00 PM

Fire Bird/Phoenix it was a lovely surprise to me. Thank you.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/21/2023 7:09:00 PM

This is so beautiful and romantic, sweet, savory and sensual; all at the same time. Yes, fall is a season for moments of bliss. Simply breathtaking Karen, the images you paint. My best to you. :) Brandy

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 9:21:00 PM

Your comments are so kind. Thank you Brandy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2023 3:04:00 PM

sweet and sensuous. I love licorice, so I liked your mention of it!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 4:00:00 PM

Cool beans! Have a great weekend Andrea!

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 10/21/2023 3:41:00 AM

This is absolutely lovely...

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 4:09:00 AM

Yolanda I appreciate you reading it. Thanks.

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/20/2023 10:44:00 PM

A wonderful, sensually written poem Karen. Very descriptive and I love the imagery. Very passionate! I particularly love the last stanza - ‘ That sweep in breeze as feet walk by’. What a great line! Love the reference to ‘ seasonal’ as well. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you for a great weekend. X :):)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2023 4:08:00 AM

Christina thanks so much for your kind words. Have a great weekend as well. Love light and hugs to you!

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 10/20/2023 5:02:00 PM

Someone asked me once if I had a "type" my reply was yes, she is kind, pure of heart, and understands me. You write with love in your heart Karen. YOU will be loved by all that have a heart! I understand you! Warmly A.S.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/20/2023 5:08:00 PM

Anonomus Scorpio that is the nicest thing ever said to me. Thank you, hugs love and light to you.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/19/2023 8:03:00 PM

Karen, glad i chose another of your poems. This is delightful lovin indeed. I actually got an audible version in my head haha but true. I think i wrote my own Fall over me poem recently… i guess instead of flu, there’s some fall hornyness going around 8-) hugs sally

Karen Jones
Date: 10/20/2023 12:23:00 AM

Hahaha you are funny. Thanks for a laugh.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/19/2023 6:38:00 PM

Talk about 'falling' in love, Karen: That 'kinetic kiss... like licorice' -- Whew. I'm looking for the fire extinguisher. Hot as blazes! ~ gw

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 6:59:00 PM

You made me giggle Gershon. Glad you enjoyed it!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/19/2023 5:14:00 PM

a lovely, romantic creation. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 5:16:00 PM

Sara thanks for reading!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 11:09:00 AM

A lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 12:02:00 PM

Thanks Paula. Glad you like it.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2023 8:17:00 AM

I like the use of alliteration. I’m also a fan of romance. Well done!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Richard!

Valsa George

Date: 10/19/2023 6:30:00 AM

"Fall into me like brown autumn leaf Melting my red heart at your touch"- Beautiful opening lines. Very romantic and sensual, dear Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 7:56:00 AM

Valsa you are kind to comment thank you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/19/2023 5:39:00 AM

Sweet and romantic, Karen. A pleasant, lively poem beckoning love!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 5:49:00 AM

Thanks for reading it Vijay.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/19/2023 2:30:00 AM

"Finding yourself like liquorice Sweet yet salty in bluesy bliss" Immersive! Love it <3

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 3:06:00 AM

Aw thanks Dilly Dally.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2023 2:19:00 AM

Ooh how sweet and sensual! I can feel the emotions flowing through this! So passionate and stunning! Well expressed and written in a very descriptive manner. Pleasure reading this

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 3:05:00 AM

Ink Empress I'm happy you enjoyed it. :0)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2023 1:19:00 AM

The mention of green reminds me of your last poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/19/2023 3:04:00 AM

Hugs I know now it is your favorite color.