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Fairy Tales and Dreams

rainbows of promise appear eliminating false hopes dreams become reality if you dare to act let's pretend moments inspire fairy tale endings -- true love conquers all 4/3/12 by Kim Merryman For Russell Sivey's A Mesh of Forms contest Dodoitsu & senryu

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2012 1:16:00 PM

Good luck in Russell's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading my works, and taking time to comment..I like the line "Dreams Become Reality"..Sara

Ann Roske

Date: 5/9/2012 1:40:00 PM

I love how you tied fairy tales to reality.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/12/2012 5:43:00 AM

Gosh I love that "let's pretend" line Kim.. Congratulations on your win in Russell's contest :) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2012 6:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2012 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2012 10:16:00 AM

Kim, congratulations with your win;-) Always~ PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/9/2012 7:16:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem Kim. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/9/2012 6:45:00 PM

YOU are right! Congrad's on your win Light & love

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/9/2012 4:59:00 PM

awww Kim this is prescious!!! Congratulations on your win...big huggsss,love debs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2012 9:01:00 AM

congrats Kim on a superb win for this brilliant mesh of forms .. eloquently composed luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/9/2012 8:24:00 AM

Hi Kim! So true, that dreams only become reality if we work towards making them real :D and I like what you say in your senryu-- so much truth there as well! Congrats on all your wins :D

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/6/2012 1:08:00 AM

Now THIS IS MY KIND OF WRITE!!! Dare to love...ahhhh, so nice, Kim! Great formS! Love, Gwendolen

Roman Chebukin

Date: 4/3/2012 10:24:00 PM

good luck in the contest girl. wishing you all the luck and the blessings of the world. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2012 9:33:00 PM

Very nicely done, Kim. Blending rainbow promise with fairy tale endings!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 8:14:00 PM

Kim, nice... good luck in the contest..Enjoyed your poem, luv~PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/3/2012 5:30:00 PM

I love this wonderful mesh of forms! I still believe in fairy tales if like you said, we act and make them come true. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda