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fairy lights-Lune Haiku

fairy lights in jars of crystal fantasy

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 12:56:00 PM

Awe, Kim, and with all of their possessive lights, I still can't find those buggers here in Hawaii, sigh. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2023 6:22:00 PM

Aloha, William! :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/14/2023 10:33:00 AM

Thanks for the memories...they were always a big attraction at twilight in West Texas. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 10:41:00 AM

:) Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 3:52:00 PM

Very creative Haiku, Kim. I like what you came up with the jazz up the old lightening bugs in a jar thing. Have a jolly good day! Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Paige Hind

Date: 11/13/2023 3:28:00 PM

Enchanting. Enjoyed it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Paige!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 2:53:00 PM

your poem whisked me away to a magical place. Such a beautiful Lune Haiku. May have to try one of those sometime. Well done, Kim. Have a great evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:10:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/13/2023 10:26:00 AM

What a delightful and enchanting Lune, Kim - like a slice of summer on a magic summer night! There is magic in your lines! If this is for a contest, best wishes for a win! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, Sam! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2023 8:57:00 AM

A lovey Haiku. I really enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 11:37:00 AM

Thank you, Paula! Blessings!