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Failure To Launch

I tried to build a space ship; my how-to book was lost. I could not find a partner to help me bear the cost. I gave up the endeavor and list the reasons why To tamper with the Universe, I will no longer try. Within our lifetimes man has found a stairway to the stars And with impudent audacity, invaded Planet Mars. There is no place we cannot go nor things we cannot do, With telescopes so strong the entire Galaxy we view. Does God still have a secret place where we cannot intrude And does He think His children are arrogant and rude? Or might He take paternal pride in man's inquiring mind And perhaps He's out there planning more magnificence to find. It is possible that He'd rather we would stay in our own berth And do a better job of taking care of Planet Earth. He's given everything we need, if we just look around And most of us are better off to stay on solid ground. The stars have been there longer than Man has been around. Let them keep some secrets that by us cannot be found. The poet and romantic prefer watching from afar And need no closer view to know how wonderful they are. By Joyce Johnson Submitted for Matt's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/3/2010 1:57:00 PM
This is a winner in my book, Joyce!! Great writing that speaks to my spirit as well. As much as I love looking at the pictures from Hubble, I'd rather somethings be left a mystery ... smile ...
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Date: 1/2/2010 1:04:00 AM
Your title describes PS admin Joyce as of yesterday PS admin have not yet altered the Contest Winners -Members page to show 2010 contest closures .Hence the winners do not yet show up.I have advised folk so that they are aware and can look result up on their member area page.Steve Eng's poem 'Jane Merchant 'was the winner. Thank you you for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/1/2010 12:51:00 AM
Is this for the spaceship contest, by chance? I just love it, Joyce. By the way, I googled you and wrote you a small note from that website. But I think my computer is messed up and doesn't get those kinds of notes to people. Please can you let me know if you got it. I really want to know if that kind of mail I send is getting to people or not. Thanks so much. Andrea
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Date: 12/31/2009 11:08:00 PM
I love this, it makes the universe seem like a playground that god is organising while we are asleep...........smile!
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:43:00 PM
Great job .. great words... great entry for the contest.. Joyce... enjoyed this trip more than u will know.. my entry is 3..2..1.. Liftoff if u care to read... ..just a note.. think u forgot to write it was for Matt's contest on your submitted for footnote.. good luck... great winner already ... if I were judging... blessings... luv... HNY 2010 .. Linda-Marie... thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry last night..
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Date: 12/30/2009 2:51:00 PM
Good write that would do well in the contest. Good luck if you enter. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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