Faded

FADED

I was visible once
but now one of the forgotten ones.
I faded away slowly
imperceptibly,
like the once vibrant colour of blue jeans.
My edges frayed 
as I walked along the road of fleeting popularity.
I felt my fabric thinning
until I became comfortable.
It made me kinda cool in a way.
I was paired with shirts and sweaters
until a time later other clothes seemed better.
My holes became too noticeable,
instead of somewhat perceptible.
The day came
when I was just a bit out of style.
So you washed and folded me
carefully put me on a shelf.
After all, I was a favourite.
No one wants to throw a favourite away.
Right there in the closet I stayed,
next to all the pretty new things.
I waited
craving  the day 
you might wear me again.
But somehow,
things just are what they are.
Faded old blue jeans
inexplicably disappear.
If you ever do find them
you smile and remember
how they made you feel.
Sadly though,
when you try them on,
they just don't fit anymore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 3:22 AM
Ha! Enjoyed this. Just now reading because I had been away from the soup for months. I do that. Stay away months then return engaged fully. Then leave again. Lol. Belated congrats on potw.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Thanks for the congrats and for your visit.
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Back with huge congrats on POTW with this keeper Richard! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Thanks so much.
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:04 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Richard :) - hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Thanks my friend.
Calasibetta Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Love your creative way of acknowledging aging.....congratulations on your POTW. Paulette
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Lawless Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 5:33 AM
BUT WAIT....They are cutting holes in their blue jeans now.....to make them look...you know....like...kinda.....worn, and worthy of admiration. Great write Richard...I think most over 40 can relate
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Thanks for stopping by John.
Meadows Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Thanks for reading.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations, Richard, on your brilliant POTW. We get attached to some clothing, and simply can not get rid of it, because of the memories it brings. Beautiful Personification - enjoyed this fabulous piece.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:14 AM
So true. Thanks for the read and commenting congrats. ;0)
Edmonds  Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Back with congratulations on your well deserved award for poem of the week… Belle
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Much appreciated. It was a pleasant surprise.
Baker Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:50 PM
I have a couple of pairs of jeans just as you subscribe ... folded in a drawer. I pull them out a few times a year to try them on ... they just seem to have lost their ability to stretch. lol Congratulations on your POTD, Rick. Enjoy your special week of recognition! Bill
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Good one. My new jeans are a stretchy material. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Nicole Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Your words are a treasure, indeed ! Not folded and placed on a shelf, but shinning like a chandelier; for all to enjoy. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Thanks so much. It was a pleasant surprise. Hugs Rick.
Lawrence Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Back with congratulations on POTW ! Hugs, Susan :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:14 PM
Much appreciated.
Kitchin Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Richard, a well penned poem, we all have that one favorite pair of jeans and wish they would fit forever, congratulations on POTW!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Thanks Tania.
Fowler Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Gosh Richard. I still wear my old jeans - to heck with trendy - give me classic! Seriously, metaphorically beautiful and eloquently written. Congratulations on POTW! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Thanks so much. Great comment.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful/true write. Great ending. I must say, some are not jeans but still loved. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:59 AM
You as well, thanks.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 6:36 AM
My favourite jeans are faded and folded, I hope to wear them again one day, I know they won’t fit, but one can wish. Enjoyed the read, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Belle
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Belle, what a pleasant surprise.
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Richard. Enjoy your special week!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 6:18 AM
What a wonderful surprise. Thanks for letting me know.
Rhymes Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Beautifully expressed .
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Thanks for reading. I tend to be a bit more verbose. I appreciate the brevity you write with.
Eslinger Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 11:45 AM
This reminded me that the truly classic most often is sourced in what is truly familiar. In my area, we hippies were the 1st generation who made jeans urban as opposed to being “farmer’s clothes” before. & we did wear them stiff to smooth. This is a lovely & like jeans, comfortable poem, tho no to fold away. Thanks too for stopping by my pg XOX
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 1:51 PM
My pleasure. I’m pleased you enjoyed my poem. ;0)
Lawrence Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 7:28 AM
The nuances of life lived , enjoyed in style and popularity brought to sensation by your favorite blue jeans . Deep, thoughtful and a bit melancholy. Memories of time gone by . I loved taking this journey with you . I love memories of my favorite jeans . I have missed your poems Richard. I hope you are smiling . Hugs, Susan :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Hi Susan, yes I am smiling. Thanks for your visit.
Nicole Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Faded, but not forgotten. Life is filled with patches, moments placed on a shelf. Always remember that, memories last forever. My best to you, Richard. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:32 AM
To you as well. Great comment. Thanks for the visit.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 5:10 PM
I really love this kind of poem. I still recall my favorite bell bottoms and it bums me out I don't know how they disappeared
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:33 AM
I remember my bell bottom jeans and my platform shoes. I’m pleased you enjoyed my poem Andrea.
Doll Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Richard, great poetry. Could be about clothes, people, aging- yes.? Best wishes~ Warren.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Thanks Warren.
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 7:04 AM
So you washed and folded me carefully put me on a shelf. After all, I was a favorite. No one wants to throw a favorite away---superb vocabulary, Richard. An awesome metaphoric write that also speaks eloquently to journey of life.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Much appreciated my friend.
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:30 PM
I thought 'faded and frayed' was all the style now... What do I know? Saggy-Baggy, Wrinkled T. Rousers
Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Cute! Thanks for the visit.
Hind Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:43 AM
You can put patches in jeans but it isn't the same...I would imagine it depends on the person wearing them; their style of being...don't give up. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Thanks, I’ve had a few patches along the way.
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