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Felicity was a flirtatious foxy female aged forty Her daring cabaret act was really quite naughty She would pole dance in her skimpy attire Men would be filled with such burning desire The club installed showers to extinguish their fire! Contest: Forty Sponsor: Silent One 01~24~16

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Stephen Pennell

Date: 2/12/2016 5:05:00 AM

absolutely fabulous, relation sister ship thanks for sharing

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2016 5:14:00 AM

Thanks Stephen:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 11:57:00 PM

Thank you...good night

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/3/2016 5:13:00 PM

Yeah, great job ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2016 5:14:00 PM

Thanks CayCay I was delighted to place in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2016 11:17:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2016 11:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 1/30/2016 8:44:00 PM

Of course it's first-rate, including the illustration. Jan's name on a poem is like "Rembrandt" lettered on a painting (well, almost, by darn).

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2016 6:38:00 AM

LOL can I be an old mistress rather than an old master lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sharon Gulley

Date: 1/28/2016 12:44:00 PM

Ha, Ha, Ha, I love this Jan, picture and all. What a fantastic and funny write. Congrats!.......Sharon, Thank you for the laugh and smile. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2016 12:47:00 PM

Thanks Sharon I had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/28/2016 12:19:00 AM

Wonderful write Jan ..Congrats on big win!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2016 2:17:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/26/2016 5:59:00 PM

Marvelous work, Jan. Enjoyed every word. Congratulations on your win. Love the first line alliteration.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Reason:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 12:14:00 PM

JAN, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2016 9:28:00 AM

This is great, I also love the cartoon. I hope you had a wonderful birthday Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Richard I did have a lovely day thankyou::-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/26/2016 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Jan on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Hans:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/25/2016 9:37:00 PM

LOL, cute, congrats Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Ed I thought I would try humour for this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2016 8:45:00 PM

I really liked your entry. congratulations on win. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:41:00 PM

Thanks so muchJoyce:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 1/25/2016 8:38:00 PM

I had to stop laughing at foxy Felicity before I could type my congratulations, Jan. well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:42:00 PM

I wonder if she really does exist Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Steve Grammatico

Date: 1/25/2016 6:56:00 PM

Jan, Love the alliteration and rhymes (forty/naughty is inspired). And the illustration is a hoot.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Steve I had fun with this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/25/2016 5:47:00 PM

Ha Ha, too cute! Nicely done. Congrats on your nice win, Jan. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 1:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 1/25/2016 4:01:00 PM

Jan, just jubilant. Jean.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2016 5:34:00 PM

Aww thanks Jean :-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 1/25/2016 3:51:00 PM

Oh Lah Lah....Wow Wee.....You Won

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2016 5:34:00 PM

I'm amazed Judy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/25/2016 8:35:00 AM

Hahaha! Love it! Ageing should make us conservative not foolishly assertive. Thanks much for the stop. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 1/25/2016 5:33:00 PM

Thanks Maurice I thought I would go for the humourous aspect of forty:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2016 3:12:00 PM

Love the humour, Jan:) ~ May I take the opportunity to wish you a very happy birthday!:))) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 3:16:00 PM

Thanks Paul I do appreciate your friendship and support and thanks for the birthday wishes - wish i could hibernate tomorrow but I have to work lol:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/24/2016 1:51:00 PM

Very funny, I especially think the picture adds a lot of flavor, great write.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 1:56:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by to comment Daniel it is another impromptu write with Rob and was great fun:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2016 12:36:00 PM

hahaha, GREAT pic that went with it. I really like what you did with forty words, sweetie.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 12:41:00 PM

Not sure if it fits the contest but I have to go with the flow of my pen lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/24/2016 11:32:00 AM

haha.. Love this one...Too bad for married loyal men , they have to stick to their lady Desperation, lol : ). Love it Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 12:11:00 PM

I am sure there are many that frequent those types of establishment... but would they admit it Charma lol:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 1/24/2016 8:49:00 AM

Oh Lah Lah....Wow Wee.....good one....

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 12:10:00 PM

I'm not sure about it for the contest but thought I would chance my luck lol:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 1/24/2016 8:23:00 AM

Funny Jan, enjoyed.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thanks James just a fun write on the forty theme lol:-) hugs jan xx