Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Fabulous At Forty

Felicity was a flirtatious foxy female aged forty
Her daring cabaret act was really quite naughty
She would pole dance in her skimpy attire
Men would be filled with such burning desire
The club installed showers to extinguish their fire!


Contest: Forty 
Sponsor: Silent One
01~24~16

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Stephen Pennell February 12, 2016 at 5:05 AM absolutely fabulous, relation sister ship thanks for sharing Jan Allison February 12, 2016 at 5:14 AM Thanks Stephen:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2016 at 11:57 PM Thank you...good night

CayCay Godwin February 3, 2016 at 5:13 PM Yeah, great job ... CayCay Jan Allison February 3, 2016 at 5:14 PM Thanks CayCay I was delighted to place in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 11:17 PM Jan, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :) Jan Allison February 1, 2016 at 11:31 AM Thanks so much Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter January 30, 2016 at 8:44 PM Of course it's first-rate, including the illustration. Jan's name on a poem is like "Rembrandt" lettered on a painting (well, almost, by darn). Jan Allison January 31, 2016 at 6:38 AM LOL can I be an old mistress rather than an old master lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sharon Gulley January 28, 2016 at 12:44 PM Ha, Ha, Ha, I love this Jan, picture and all. What a fantastic and funny write. Congrats!.......Sharon, Thank you for the laugh and smile. :) Jan Allison January 28, 2016 at 12:47 PM Thanks Sharon I had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 28, 2016 at 12:19 AM Wonderful write Jan ..Congrats on big win!! Jan Allison January 28, 2016 at 2:17 AM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet January 26, 2016 at 5:59 PM Marvelous work, Jan. Enjoyed every word. Congratulations on your win. Love the first line alliteration. Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 6:45 PM Thanks Reason:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A January 26, 2016 at 12:14 PM JAN, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT** Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:40 PM Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2016 at 9:28 AM This is great, I also love the cartoon. I hope you had a wonderful birthday Jan. Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:40 PM Thanks Richard I did have a lovely day thankyou::-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa January 26, 2016 at 8:29 AM Congratulations Jan on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:41 PM Thanks so much Hans:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs January 25, 2016 at 9:37 PM LOL, cute, congrats Jan :) Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:41 PM Thanks so much Ed I thought I would try humour for this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Joyce Johnson January 25, 2016 at 8:45 PM I really liked your entry. congratulations on win. Love, Joyce Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:41 PM Thanks so muchJoyce:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane January 25, 2016 at 8:38 PM I had to stop laughing at foxy Felicity before I could type my congratulations, Jan. well done. Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:42 PM I wonder if she really does exist Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Steve Grammatico January 25, 2016 at 6:56 PM Jan, Love the alliteration and rhymes (forty/naughty is inspired). And the illustration is a hoot. Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:42 PM Thanks so much Steve I had fun with this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight January 25, 2016 at 5:47 PM Ha Ha, too cute! Nicely done. Congrats on your nice win, Jan. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 1:42 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray January 25, 2016 at 4:01 PM Jan, just jubilant. Jean. Jan Allison January 25, 2016 at 5:34 PM Aww thanks Jean :-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos January 25, 2016 at 3:51 PM Oh Lah Lah....Wow Wee.....You Won Jan Allison January 25, 2016 at 5:34 PM I'm amazed Judy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler January 25, 2016 at 8:35 AM Hahaha! Love it! Ageing should make us conservative not foolishly assertive. Thanks much for the stop. / M Jan Allison January 25, 2016 at 5:33 PM Thanks Maurice I thought I would go for the humourous aspect of forty:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 24, 2016 at 3:12 PM Love the humour, Jan:) ~ May I take the opportunity to wish you a very happy birthday!:))) Hugs // paul Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 3:16 PM Thanks Paul I do appreciate your friendship and support and thanks for the birthday wishes - wish i could hibernate tomorrow but I have to work lol:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner January 24, 2016 at 1:51 PM Very funny, I especially think the picture adds a lot of flavor, great write. Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 1:56 PM Thanks for dropping by to comment Daniel it is another impromptu write with Rob and was great fun:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 12:36 PM hahaha, GREAT pic that went with it. I really like what you did with forty words, sweetie. Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 12:41 PM Not sure if it fits the contest but I have to go with the flow of my pen lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop January 24, 2016 at 11:32 AM haha.. Love this one...Too bad for married loyal men , they have to stick to their lady Desperation, lol : ). Love it Jan. Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 12:11 PM I am sure there are many that frequent those types of establishment... but would they admit it Charma lol:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos January 24, 2016 at 8:49 AM Oh Lah Lah....Wow Wee.....good one.... Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 12:10 PM I'm not sure about it for the contest but thought I would chance my luck lol:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman January 24, 2016 at 8:23 AM Funny Jan, enjoyed. Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 12:10 PM Thanks James just a fun write on the forty theme lol:-) hugs jan xx

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