Fabricated Charm

Token love tendered with a cheap card
Bartered lyric from a trite bard
Gilded, fabricated charm
Brokered, pretentious smarm
Words, symbols to treasure then disregard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Many congrats Stephen on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations Stephen on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 5:36 AM
An intense limerick Stephen, congratulations on your win in Francine's contest ;)
George   Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:11 PM
Very profound limerick, Stephen. Congrat's on your big win, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations Stephen on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses
Calhoun Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:16 AM
Hi Stephen - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 1:45 AM
Nice write. Why didn't this one finish higher in the contest?
Johnson Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 10:29 PM
Oh but we girls save them in a pretty box to be treasured. Congratulations on your win, Stephen. Love, joyce
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Congratulations, STephen, on your win in the contest. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:38 PM
Congrats Stephen on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest... enjoy another sweet success with luv..
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Stephen
Roberts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 6:19 PM
congrats Stephen on your sixth place win in my Valentines day contest
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January 25, 2011 at 4:20 PM
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