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Eyes First Meet

Out of the Mist How could one forget fog upon the mountain top... eyes so blue so true. Not a Word Spoken This burden so shy the need of lesson to love... help communicate. Into the Dawn The sun yet to rise the morning air unending... ready to love you. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Date: 12/30/2012 9:50:00 PM
Back to this beautiful array of haiku, Harry. About that dread poem. It's job related but I don't dare say that in case anyone from my work ever reads what I am saying in public. They have me very worried. I may lose my job and I am sick about it. It's a long story. I can only do my best and pray God will be with me. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/2/2012 5:06:00 PM
A beautiful threesome; each with a story to tell and each so different but all on the same theme. Very special Harry.
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win : ) Jack
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Date: 4/4/2011 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Harry in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:36:00 PM
wonderful entry Harry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:17:00 PM
I remember this beauty, Harry.Congratulations on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:36:00 PM
Hey there Harry, this is really beautiful, love all three of them.. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congrats harry on your well deserved win--kashinath
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:07:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Harry. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, with this lovely string Senryu. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:30:00 AM
Very romantic series--I totally loved that last senryu, Harry-- was just totally smiling at the end of it-- super congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:46:00 PM
Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear harry.
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:17:00 PM
Very nice and romantic Harry. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:53:00 PM
Lovely write and congratulations on your win. Alexa
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Michael, harry
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:22:00 PM
harry! happy cheers for the win.. amazing! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your 10th Place win in Michael's Contest, Harry. Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/1/2011 2:48:00 PM
So pleased to see this great poem in the winners' circle, Harry. Congraulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2011 2:35:00 PM
Way to go Harry my friend and a big congrats on your winning poem in Michael's cool contest luv.. an exciting entry ... enjoy another top ten sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 4/1/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Harry on your success in my contest...
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Date: 3/28/2011 11:31:00 PM
Soup mail.
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Date: 3/28/2011 10:00:00 PM
Using titles for each one was different and moved this into eventual dawn. I really enjoyed this one and especially the imagery of the first and last ones!
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:21:00 PM
Elegant beauty Harry my friend.. such breathtaking lines to dwell upon luv.. good luck in the contest.. Michael will surely luv.. as I do..
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Date: 3/28/2011 11:11:00 AM
Very nice. best wishes in the contest
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Date: 3/28/2011 10:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Harry. The best to you in the contest. May you have a beautiful week of good health, love and baskets overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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