Notes About The Poem

for Unseeking Seekers contest ; 

 "Line of inquiry: What is that awareness by which each body-mind feels alive and becomes aware?

 

Eye of the Eye

When the silk of night falls upon my skin,
I close my eyes,
unlock the heart of stillness,
as thoughts sleep at the back of my breath,
and wordless light 
wakes within the pulse,
a lucid awakening ~ 
tracing tranquility,
for I am nameless,
undisturbed and untouched,
by the ghosts I once followed,
like jasmine among wild violets,
like lotus among forgotten reeds, 
thornless and fragrant,
in sync with the 
frequencies of the formless cosmos,
sprinkling stardust
upon my crystalline consciousness,
calming the racing thoughts
that once controlled 
              the motion of emotions…

O beloved,
feel these feverish fingertips,
forsake the labels hung
across my sky of healing,
as in this mindfulness,
I abandon the emptiness of ego,
to embrace the pristine presence
of hyacinth haze,
the ethereal gaze of your purified aura,
where love and light
moves slowly into
the musicality of meditation…

Tonight, I see beyond the seeing,
and dream within dreams,
to walk through astral ropes
to a place where
there is peace and quietness ~
silence that sings and wraps
this soul in rainbow radiance,
a petrichor of rising rays,
where memory holds no misery,
and the mind homes
the musky mists of clarity,
detached from darkness
erasing the cluttered noise,
and that which dragged my
silhouette to the dusk…

So feel me,
I am the kundalini light
and the magical mirror that
reveals the gossamer glow of gold,
for I seek nothing,
but thoughtless awareness,
sitting in my muted orbit,
like a blooming flower
facing the phases of the moon
with resilience and patience,
    silence, my saffron salvation
         serenity my sanguine sanctuary,
this zen ~ my zealous zephyr  …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bordner Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 6:53 AM
I have held flowers and fire, light and salt too, yet nothing compares to love of You, as rain perfumes the rock of rugged patience I soften to your guidance, I breathe in beauty unbeknownst to death, for you grew within me as flame with no burn, fed me faith of discern, we are more than together in wild storm, we are one upon the faultless form of the divine reborn...J.A.B.
La France Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Ink, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 3:25 AM
Such eloquence and beauty in your poetry! Congratulations on your win!!
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Unseeking Seeker's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 4:53 PM
Dear Empress, I’ve have spent a lot of time watching those ghosts try to drag the silhouette back into the dusk, and I know that "thoughtless awareness" isn't a passive state, it’s a hard-won territory. The idea of "saffron salvation" hits home, it’s that disciplined sanctuary you have to build for yourself when the racing thoughts get too loud. Now my thoughts are racing again. I will cherish your poetic beauty for always. Blessings, Daniel
Jones Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 4:29 AM
This is beautiful and very relaxing! Your poetic expression and imagery is amazing as usual. Congratulations dear Inky on lifting your reader to new heights! A well deserved win.
G  Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 11:07 PM
I'm enlightened and feel my feet on the ground being part of this line up! Congratulations on your podium placing with this phenomenally beautiful poem!
Lane Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 6:57 AM
I once described your poetry as being 'flowery.' In this one your garden speaks for your thoughts because you are the jasmine among wild violets, and the lotus among forgotten reeds, thornless and fragrant like the light you always offer your readers.
George Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 5:26 AM
"Tonight, I see beyond the seeing, and dream within dreams, to walk through astral ropes to a place where there is peace and quietness ~:"Amazing thoughts. Unseeking Seeker will definitely enjoy your stream of thought. You emerge with a 'purified aura' as you withdraw into meditative silence. You have done full justice to the line of inquiry. All the Best dear Empress.
DiMino Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 4:27 PM
"as thoughts sleep at the back of my breath, and wordless light wakes within the pulse," -- love that. "thornless and fragrant, in sync with the frequencies of the formless cosmos, sprinkling stardust" -- Wow, great imagery. Beautiful writing throughout. Beginning to think you only know how to write great poetry. Another treasure!
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:53 AM
Awn thats such a kind and encouraging thing to say dear Joe! You are so supportive! I am truly honored! Thank you so very much always! Sending you light always
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:58 PM
WOW from the first line to the last line. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" A winner for me. Have a great day writing away............
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:52 AM
Awwn sweet paula! You are truly such a kind soul. Thank you so much for supporting me always. Sending you light always
Kannan Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 7:20 AM
Oh WOW!!!! Beautifully written... Loved the flow, rhythm, and everything. I think this is the first time I am reading you and I am totally mesmerized...
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:49 AM
Awwn i always love meeting new poets, thank you for your heart warming response: im so honored, sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 4:23 AM
You write so flowingly… poetry is your gift. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:48 AM
Thank you so much for your unwavering support dear Robert, I appreciate your kindness: sending you light always
G  Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Faved!
G  Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 2:08 AM
Just go global! Go global immediately with your mindfulness sessions!!! This is insanely good! I'm not sure how I can cope with not having written it myself, the knowledge it is possible to write like this causes a whole event where a lens zooms out from earth and the whole galaxy is revealed and pans out into infinite universes then I think about what I wrote last and it was about a custard pie lol
Empress Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 2:17 AM
Hahaha custardy cravings! Omg! I was inspired! I missed writing for seekers contests. It was so fun doing this. I had to do some research on this to full grasp and deliver: hopefully i did it well. Thank you so much for this comment and also the fave! Im beyond thrilled :D
Onpaper Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:55 AM
silk of night falls upon my skin… mmmm this line is gorgeous papi .. !! ghosts I once followed, like jasmine among wild violets,oooooooo !!!! Damn!! Love that! like lotus among forgotten reeds, damn u just gonna make my heart skip a beat !!! So feel me, I am the kundalini light.. indeed you r my lil kundhalini saktiiiii and the magical mirror that reveals the gossamer glow of gold,.. it’s like floating in a bed of your art!! Love every line in this piece.
Empress Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 2:17 AM
Papi u always feel my kundalini light! Thank u so much! Haha
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