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Eye In Eye, Edvard Munch

I've since looked at Kiss IV by Munch about his relationship with Tulla Larsen and may revisit poem this as I feel differently about this painting now... Inspired by the oil painting, Eye in Eye by Edvard Munch, 1894. Viewing the painting will help make sense of the poem. I look, you look, nobody sees Tresses tangle and ensnare Both of us, locked in place, unloved The tree, the only one truly alive here You are present, I see you Though you evanesce, fade, volatilize The bare minimum left in place I am scrutinised, though unseen None of the information about me ever obtained from me Every questioning stare, holds corrosive power that burns away my skin, dissolves my energy As I use all my resolve to survive staying, here The tree canopy covers me in kindness Or enshrouds me sadly I no longer sense the difference There is no sight to see through the house windows No observation, eye in eye I stand and I stare Burning from the inside out In silent contemplation, of my fixed position No one speaks to heal my pain, no arms embrace Comfort is withheld Should I fall at your feet, I'd be absorbed by the ground, out of existence The only chance of bliss, to become the green of the tree But the tree also stands alone, rooted to the spot alone and unseen We're all sorry, but here we are In the garden, doing our best impression of connecting By standing, face to face, eye in eye I feel misunderstood to the point of internal rot Unknown to the point of physical pain But I'll walk out of the shade of the tree Sit in the sun and be thankful Today contained no outward distain of spoken words Just that look, that removes my validity We're all sorry But here we are

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Date: 4/11/2023 5:44:00 PM
In silent contemplation, of my fixed position But no one speaks to heal my pain No arms embrace me Comfort is withheld AND by standing face to face, eye in eye I feel misunderstood to the point of internal rot Unknown to the point of physical pain…great imagery! What a great painting you’ve chosen.
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Date: 4/11/2023 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Kim, I know - it's a hidden gem. I hadn't seen it before I went searching for more Munch paintings. I'm still working on the flow - it's seems a shame to leave it looking a bit unfinished. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 4/10/2023 6:58:00 PM
A very visually challenging poem reflecting the mood of Munch ( one of my favourite painters ). Often has a lot of menace and foreboding in his work which I think you have captured. The ending rescues the speaker from the dark. A really interesting and engaging write.
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Date: 4/12/2023 1:11:00 AM
I've reworked several lines and played around with line breaks - hopefully improved
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Date: 4/10/2023 11:19:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I've done several Munch ekphrasis. Glad you like it. This was written and immediately posted (a bad habit of mine) so I'll need to tweak it into place at least. I'm always surprised by how much I get from art, I never used to really give it a chance as thought it was all for posh people. Edit 1 has now occurred

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