Extraordinary Senses

"extraordinary senses"

along each story sensations begin with the symphony
in my mind I'm dancing like a ballerina within a ballet

I see myself twirling flying and spinning ever so free
I envision each move and the feel reaches me my soul

a rainbow away I join glinda and her perfect world
with one tap of her wand a beautiful ballet begins

dancing high above the ground where everything is clear
there is nothing that can touch this moment of magic

as long as my mind can see I am forever released
released for extraordinary senses to heighten and soar

SkyWatcher
09-07-22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Lovely poetry, my friend. Real ballet does the same for my. My aunt and uncle own the Dallas Metropolitian Ballet Compnay. They both danced for the New York Ballet before starting their own company 40 years ago. Got to run, dinner's ready. :-) Let your imagination please you often , Lisa. Hugs, Bill
Ricci Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Dear Bill. Good Morning. I am so sorry for this late response. I find it a gift and honor that you shared your story of your aunt and uncle and the connection with the ballet. Thank you for that. How wonderful in every way. I didn't grow up with the ballet but I grew up with musicals and live productions that always filled my life. Yes, may we all be free and know the feeling of it all. Blessings back to you now and always. (smile)
Horsman Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 1:34 AM
The first word of your title, tells me what this poetry is, and the mindset that wrote it. Love the imagery, also. Harry
Ricci Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Wow Harry. Good Morning. How do I begin to say thank you for such a review and commentary. I only hope that my work and I are deserving of such generosity. Thank you Thank you. Truly. May we all envision with all its feeling and more to which we are all deserving of. Have a beautiful day and weekend too. Blessings always,,, (thank you for the smile that your visit brings)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 12:49 AM
Such lovely words penned so eloquently Lisa, great imagery and insightfulness too. Blessings always, Gordon
Ricci Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 5:43 AM
Good Morning Gordon. Hi. Thank you for sharing your very generous intake and commentary to which I do not take for granted. May we all see envision and feel. Have a wonderful weekend. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. Blessings back to you. Thank you. (smile)
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 6:30 PM
I can see the dance with my minds eye and my souls view, very beautiful, so evocative and pleasant to read Lisa. Dancing is great therapy :)
Ricci Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 5:40 AM
Good Morning Mystic Rose. I'm so glad you can see the visions and feel. That is a plus. Thank you ever so much for your beautiful and generous review. Truly. Have a wonderful day and may your mind always see. (smile) Blessings...
Deo Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Dance away, Dorothy. There's always a new heart ( forvtinman, and from Jesus, for us, FOR LOVE) Shalom shalom shalom Lisa Lisa Lisa
Ricci Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 4:12 PM
Top of The Late Evening or Early Morning to you Anil. Hi. Thank you for being you and for being enthusiastic even through the page (smile smile smile). Yes, may we all even in our mind fly away to freedom and yes again experience the feel of it all. Everyone is deserving of that. And now. you guessed it, I Dorothy (smile smile smile) say to you Shalom Shalom Nasmaste Namaste. Love and Blessings always...
Buhagiar Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 2:16 AM
Extraordinary vision, so full of images. Well written.
Ricci Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Good Afternoon Victor. Hi. Coming from you who always delivers imagery I am honored. Truly. Thank you so much. May we all know the feeling of being free and all that it entails. Love Peace and Blessings now and always.
Tor Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 7:51 PM
Beautiful to read Lisa.
Ricci Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Hello michael. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Yes, freedom freedom freedom and the feeling of it all. Have a wonderful day. keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup as well. (smile) Take Care.
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 5:44 PM
I agree with Heidi, this is beautiful indeed.
Ricci Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 5:08 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Thank you very much. Never do I take words reviews or visits for granted. May we all know the feeling of being free. Have a wonderful morning and keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile)
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 1:28 PM
This is beautiful, freeing and peaceful Lisa. I enjoyed it :)
Ricci Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Thank you very much Heidi. Hi. May we all be a ballerina with the feeling of being free and experiencing all the senses it entails. Have a wonderful night. May this day find you well. I will see you soon on your page. Blessings
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