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Exposed To the World

Throughout my life I’ve kept unto myself my feelings and my thoughts held deep within, and stored like dusty books upon a shelf, preventing my emotions to begin. The thoughts I’ve been reluctant to confide lest hidden dreams left to the world to find; these inner thoughts that always did reside, are buried in the attic in my mind. But as I’ve gotten older now I see that maybe inner thoughts I should convey; perhaps to share these thoughts was meant to be, not keeping them forever locked away. And now as thoughts descend the attic stair, I feel somewhat exposed as soul is bare. October 18, 2019

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John Hamilton

Date: 10/23/2019 2:53:00 PM

This was so well executed John, I wasn't sure if the sonnet was going to connect with this challenge, but obviously did with me and the contest sponsor, congrats on placing in a very difficult premium contest challenge!

John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2019 3:04:00 PM

Thank, John, I appreciate it. I wasn't sure if it would connect either, but that's were my muse took me. I always was a bit of a rebel. John

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/23/2019 6:22:00 AM

congrats on your win Jim .

John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2019 8:31:00 AM

Thanks, Pixie. John

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 10/23/2019 4:35:00 AM

A brilliant sonnet from a brilliant poet who seems to be the only one who performed the contest theme indirectly. Definitely fav.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/23/2019 5:03:00 AM

Through me, a reader applauds such a masterful different direction.

John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2019 4:56:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Kurt, I am humbled. My muse took a different direction in this contest. Thank you for tagging it as a favorite. John

John Lawless

Date: 10/22/2019 7:34:00 PM

Well John, poetry offers us, or at least me, an avenue to "expose" myself. Very thoughtful thought provoking write. Thanks for entering the contest

John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2019 4:48:00 AM

Thanks, John, poetry does give us as avenue to expose ourselves. Thanks for hosting the contest. John

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/22/2019 5:57:00 AM

Hello John~ I love your poem. Being one who never hid mine all my life, i know whats its like to get hit hard for so doing..We are a body of people not one person. Just because we are poets does not mean we are sane!)))) Many hurting and hurtful people here.. So, please use discretion. Panagiota I encourage you to share them with people you know in real life! Online life is not real.

John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2019 6:22:00 AM

Thank you, Panagiota, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/20/2019 1:15:00 PM

I’m so thankful you continue to share your thoughts and beautiful poetry with us John :-) x

John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2019 4:30:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine, I appreciate you. As long as people continue to read my poetry I all continue to write. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/18/2019 7:27:00 PM

I am happy that you are sharing your thoughts- the inner moments of all that is you. Your heart holds so many wonderful emotions. You and your thoughts should always touch the sky. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 10/19/2019 8:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, B, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. I have found a certain joy sharing my thoughts with the world. All the best my sweet friend. Hugs, John

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/18/2019 8:27:00 AM

Yes! We become less anxious to share our inner selves as we grow older! Nice, John :) Kim

John Gondolf
Date: 10/19/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughts, Kim, I appreciate you. Hugs, John

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/18/2019 8:17:00 AM

Well expressed John! :)

John Gondolf
Date: 10/18/2019 8:18:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi, I appreciate it. Hugs, John