Everything

"everything" what can be said of your touches that touch what can be seen of your glances that show one reaching of my hand one loving smile noticed my reply is everything what can be found in my embraces that embrace what can be witnessed of my face that reveals one stretch reaching your hand one tender scroll in your direction still my reply is everything what can be said of all of this what can be known of our passions one caress that caresses one stare that hypnotizes always my reply is everything SkyWatcher 08-24-23 note thank you to all that visit my page words do not express my appreciation I just wanted to quickly post one more entry I will once again be away from the computer until next week my mother needs help I have to have my car fixed because of a recent auto accident anyway..... peace and blessings to all thank you see you soon

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Paul Bell

Date: 8/31/2023 1:56:00 AM

The simple verse telling us love is still around. Just that glance to say the spark is still there and life is good, and who knows what might happen after dinner. Hope you're okay after your accident, and mummy's doing well.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/31/2023 3:35:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. Hello. Thank you so much for your gracious and generous review and commentary. I feel better thank you for that too. My mom is 87 so she needs more help these days. Have a wonderful day. Thank you again. Blessings always (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/26/2023 2:53:00 PM

A beautifully written love poem, Lisa. A nice way to let us know not to panic, you'll be back in a week. :-) Thanks for being and loving and caring, daughter. Hugs and Prayers, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/30/2023 3:05:00 AM

Good Morning Mr. Bill. Hi. Thank you ever so much for your understanding and for your generosity and graciousness. Truly. Yes, my mom is getting older and needs more help and in the mix I had a car accident. Anyway, should life be any different... - As far as the entry itself Bill, may all know of love. May today be a good day for all. Blessings and Peace now and always to you and Sara (smile and smile again)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2023 10:17:00 AM

This is so beautiful and romantic Lisa, hope things go well with mum and the car and you will be back with us soon:-) hugs jan xx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/30/2023 2:59:00 AM

Hi Jan. Good Morning. I am so very sorry for this late response. Thank you very much for a generous and wonderful review to which I do not take for granted. Truly. Your commentary is also generous too concerning my life. I'm still waiting for the police report.... and yes - may mom is getting older so she is needing more help. Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again Jan. Blessings and Peace always. (smile smile smile)

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/24/2023 6:39:00 AM

A beautiful, thoughtful poem Lisa. Really enjoyed it. Hope all goes well with your busy week. Take care and much blessings.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/30/2023 2:44:00 AM

Hello Christina. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much for such a lovely and generous review and commentary and for understanding my late response to your review. May all know of love. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup too. (smile) Take Care