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Swap Quatrain
Created by Lorraine M. Kanter. Within the Swap Quatrain, each stanza in the poem must be a quatrain (four lines) where the first line is reversed in the fourth line. In addition, line 2 must rhyme with line 1, and line 3 must rhyme with line 4 and so on, BUT not repeat the same rhyming pattern in subsequent stanzas. Rhyming pattern: AABB, CCDD, and so on. 

Leaves change color every Autumn, painting trees from top to bottom. And as children whoop and holler, every Autumn leaves change color. As greens disappear, reds abound, and orange hues litter the ground. Preparing for Fall's grand premiere, reds abound as greens disappear. Crimson and gold, painting the trees, ink leaves fluttering in the breeze. Autumn's beauty never grows old, painting the trees crimson and gold. Etched on glass panes, crystals of ice form feathered swirls, sharp and precise. And on cold nights, Jack frost maintains crystals of ice etched on glass panes. The trees stand bare, stripped of their leaves Autumn breezes acting like thieves. And with naked limbs everywhere, stripped of their leaves, the trees stand bare. (Swap Quatrain) 09/30/2022

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Date: 10/2/2022 6:29:00 PM
So many wonderful, colorful, striking images that highlight your creativity Emile. Congratulations on your win! Blessings on autumn winds!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, I appreciate your comments, my friend, have a wonderful day, Emile.
Date: 10/2/2022 10:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Emile :) -
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Date: 10/3/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/2/2022 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, so much colour, great imagery. Nicely penned.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2022 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2022 1:12:00 PM
Another most enjoyable Swap Quatrain. I think I wrote another one the other day, Emile. They are sort of habit-forming! Good job.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2022 9:00:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2022 11:58:00 AM
- Autumn has made its arrival ... but, I hope King Winter sleeps for a long time this year ... he doesn't have to come at all - Excellent poem Emile, best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2022 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate your comments, you honor me, my friend, Emile.

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