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Eventide

Eventide eases a discordant day as peach amber contrails billow on high. Pink ginger crawls throughout dark smoky gray and fades as peaceful night’s cover grows nigh. An informal jam of the waves below, throbs in harmonic regularity. The nourishing sounds, some high and some low, invigorate with their sweet charity. Muffled moans and grievous groans of the week, adversity and conflict lose their sway. Improbable dreams and hopes of the meek a nearer realization away.

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John Hamilton

Date: 8/14/2023 6:26:00 PM

Loved this one Linda enjoyed the flow and the rhymes, well done.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/14/2023 7:12:00 PM

Many thanks John. I appreciate your visit and thoughtful comments. :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/1/2023 8:33:00 AM

A wonderful rhythmic poem Linda.Flows so well.Great skill.Really enjoyed reading it and found it inspiring. Many thanks for sharing.Warmest wishes.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/2/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Christina. I appreciate your visit and comment! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 7/21/2023 10:39:00 PM

Wonderful use of colors and sounds to create the imagery of your words, Linda. I enjoy your poem that made the Top 100 new poems list. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2023 12:39:00 PM

Hello my fellow Texan. Always encouraging to read you supportive comments. I had no idea this one was on the Top 100 - thanks for letting me know! :)

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/25/2023 9:50:00 AM

Beautifully poetic phraseology, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/25/2023 9:55:00 AM

Many thanks Jim. I appreciate your visit and thoughtful comments. Linda :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/22/2023 5:27:00 AM

Linda, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/22/2023 5:49:00 AM

Many thanks for my placement Constance. I always enjoy your contests! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/20/2023 2:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a great day.............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 2:21:00 PM

Thank you friend Paula. Hugs, :)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 6/20/2023 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your deserved winning, Linda. Beautiful poem indeed. Thank you!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 2:21:00 PM

Many thanks Maria. I appreciate your comments. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/20/2023 9:39:00 AM

Reading this is pure bliss, Linda. Congratulations on your win. :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 9:43:00 AM

Many thanks for your kind comments Evelyn! :)

Valsa George

Date: 6/19/2023 8:25:00 PM

So beautifully written. Congratulations Linda on your top placement.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 7:14:00 AM

Thanks you dear Valsa. Your comments cheer me. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/19/2023 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest win with this beautiful poem.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 7:13:00 AM

Oh so many thanks Las. I always appreciate your comments. :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/16/2023 5:40:00 AM

Mixing enchanting colors with delectable food is so clever! Then nourishing sounds with sweet charity and you have an improbable dream ! What a wonderful way to describe Eventide, and what a wonderful word to choose. BOL. It's great.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/16/2023 5:58:00 AM

HI Svvie! You're the best! Thank you my friend. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/16/2023 5:26:00 AM

A beautiful depiction ruminating in eventide, Linda. A poem undulating splendidly with highs and lows of life. A FAVE.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/16/2023 5:57:00 AM

Ahh my friend Vijay. Your words are kind to my ears. Thank you for the lovely comment and fav! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/16/2023 2:21:00 AM

Outstanding scenario. A poem I loved.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/16/2023 5:56:00 AM

Thank you dear Victor. hugs! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2023 7:28:00 PM

Excellent descriptive writing, Linda! I especially like the first stanza. blessings, Kim M

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/16/2023 5:56:00 AM

Hello Kim So kind of you to stop by and read my poem. Thank you for the enjoying this poem. :)