Eventide

Eventide eases a discordant day as peach amber contrails billow on high. Pink ginger crawls throughout dark smoky gray and fades as peaceful night’s cover grows nigh. An informal jam of the waves below, throbs in harmonic regularity. The nourishing sounds, some high and some low, invigorate with their sweet charity. Muffled moans and grievous groans of the week, adversity and conflict lose their sway. Improbable dreams and hopes of the meek a nearer realization away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hamilton Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Loved this one Linda enjoyed the flow and the rhymes, well done.
Fowler Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Many thanks John. I appreciate your visit and thoughtful comments. :)
Bowring Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 8:33 AM
A wonderful rhythmic poem Linda.Flows so well.Great skill.Really enjoyed reading it and found it inspiring. Many thanks for sharing.Warmest wishes.
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Christina. I appreciate your visit and comment! :)
Baker Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 10:39 PM
Wonderful use of colors and sounds to create the imagery of your words, Linda. I enjoy your poem that made the Top 100 new poems list. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Bill
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Hello my fellow Texan. Always encouraging to read you supportive comments. I had no idea this one was on the Top 100 - thanks for letting me know! :)
Slaughter Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Beautifully poetic phraseology, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Many thanks Jim. I appreciate your visit and thoughtful comments. Linda :)
La France Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Linda, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Fowler Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Many thanks for my placement Constance. I always enjoy your contests! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a great day.............
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 2:21 PM
Thank you friend Paula. Hugs, :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your deserved winning, Linda. Beautiful poem indeed. Thank you!
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 2:21 PM
Many thanks Maria. I appreciate your comments. :)
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Reading this is pure bliss, Linda. Congratulations on your win. :)
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 9:43 AM
Many thanks for your kind comments Evelyn! :)
George Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 8:25 PM
So beautifully written. Congratulations Linda on your top placement.
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Thanks you dear Valsa. Your comments cheer me. :)
Poet Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on your contest win with this beautiful poem.
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Oh so many thanks Las. I always appreciate your comments. :)
Volumes Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Mixing enchanting colors with delectable food is so clever! Then nourishing sounds with sweet charity and you have an improbable dream ! What a wonderful way to describe Eventide, and what a wonderful word to choose. BOL. It's great.
Fowler Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:58 AM
HI Svvie! You're the best! Thank you my friend. :)
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:26 AM
A beautiful depiction ruminating in eventide, Linda. A poem undulating splendidly with highs and lows of life. A FAVE.
Fowler Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Ahh my friend Vijay. Your words are kind to my ears. Thank you for the lovely comment and fav! :)
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June 16, 2023 at 2:21 AM
Outstanding scenario. A poem I loved.
Fowler Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Thank you dear Victor. hugs! :)
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June 15, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Excellent descriptive writing, Linda! I especially like the first stanza. blessings, Kim M
Fowler Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Hello Kim So kind of you to stop by and read my poem. Thank you for the enjoying this poem. :)
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